Naruto: Chronicles of a Fire Ninja
The MC transmigrates to the Narutoverse in the body of an orphan boy from the Senju clan, as a normal person from modern Earth he has little to no fighting experience, but luckily time is something he has a lot as Naruto is just 6 months old so, he can slowly build his strength to live a "Peace-full" life
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Warning:
1. This is not a story where MC will get powers overnight and become overpowered in Narutoverse, he will slowly build his strength, not too slow but not too fast
2. There will be a lot of killing and when I say killing I mean brutal one too
3. this novel will also have an academic arc too
4. BARUTO is a big no for me as I am a die-hard fan of Naruto so the plot of Baruto is not in this novel
5. our MC is smart and not some hot-headed fool so, don't expect him to put his life in danger all the time(and yes he is super handsome and you can see in the cover photo)
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or its characters (except the original characters I create). The image used in the cover is generated using AI after many tries :P
Same novel with less grammatical errors- https://www.webnovel.com/book/naruto-chronicles-of-a-fire-ninja_30154652408482805
hey guy, here is images of our main characters, I hope you guys will like it these are images of there childhood i will also update there matures form images but when story has progressed till some point /**** Please leave a review about your experience in review or comment section : D *****/ kaida
hey guy, here is images of our main characters, I hope you guys will like it these are images of there childhood i will also update there matures form images but when story has progressed till some point /**** Please leave a review about your experience in review or comment section : D *****/ KOMI
if he is a senju then why is he living in an orphanage????
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Really everything was fine until the mc got emotionally blackmailed into accepting another girl. It’s really disappointing. Even the relationship with the other girl is really flat and is just nice to read or to be ignored. And no one ever come at me with strong people alwys have many girls around them. Every strong ninja in Naruto has 1 wife. Was good until chap 54 even tho it was basically a training montage
Alright this is actually a decent fanfic. No system, no ludicrous wish fulfilment nonsense. There are a few flaws though. The first is that you obviously do not proofread. The second is that your attention to standard writing rules is half assed : You do not start your sentences with capitals, you write numbers with symbols instead of letters. Lastly, sometimes it gets a little too much with other’s reaction of the main character deeds. Many times I have found myself half sighing/cringing when I read Hiruzen thinking "how is he this good oh my god 🥵🥵". No. He is Hiruzen Sarutobi, he has seen Jounin level seven year-old before and all kind of prodigees through his decades of kagedom. Get that fixed, and your story will level up in quality greatly. I wish you the best !
Love the story and thanks for updating so frequently Also this is what I’m imagining the mc looks like when he gets older
I tried to read this book but it became too much for me this book isn’t even about mc himself.. that oc girl is like tail of the mc every single chapter you describe every move of the mc with her, like they went to sleep they trained together bla bla. There is no character development at all. not worth it
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Logically, the novel is progressing in a manageable way for now. The only problem is that the girl next to the MC can somehow keep up with him. And the girl has no special lineage. It's uploaded almost every day. The average episode length is neither too short nor too long.
The work of this fic is nice and really good to read. As a suggestion, It would be awesome to have more interaction with the Rookie 9.
The MC is not edge lord and thank god it is not a system novel. Book is good. Atleast Give it a try before passing judgement. My first issue is pacing. The pacing is too fast paced and stabilized somewhere around 50 chapters. Hope author continues it that way otherwise it feels like watching a YouTube video on 4x speed. Second issue is main characters are training day in and day out. There is not enough break. From readers POV it would too overwhelming as they are productive every chapter posted. To offside it, show how MC and similar are interacting like going outside doing something entertaining etc. it kinda takes readers mind off but the transition should be organic. MC is becoming too OP too fast. Even without system cheats MC is becoming OP too fast. Better make the MC settle for sometime and make readers adjusted. Naruto is a story which takes more chapters to fully explore. So it is best if author takes it slow and explores more. Author specific:- If you are serious about writing this fic, Try to look in reddit sub threads for novels with high intense fight narration. It might help writing more flushed out fight scenes. Fight scenes are the bread and butter of Naruto fic. The story premise would be same for all the thousands of fics but if you want your fic to stand out you need to bring in more to the table. Overall it is 4 out of 5. Let me know about the criticism author if you have read the review.
I very much enjoyed the story and the pace though I feel like it could go faster in parts slower in other but overall a great piece so far keep up the good work
It is a good story I like everything about it apart from the harem part I really think he should only stay with Yomi or it will ruin the story
One of the best Naruto fanfic!!!!!!💓💓💓💓💓💓