Elder Scrolls: Naruto

Some call me shameless, and they would be right. I'm going to say English is not my native language so you will be more kind with your reviews. I think this is the best novel I've written so...you better like it too or I'll write you into the story, make you have a happy life with a beautiful wife, all so I can NTR you for revenge...you've been warned.

It's just a typical fanfic, nothing really special. What is unique is the how hateful the author is, every chapter the author is this argueing and insulting people who give any sort of negative feedback. Then proceeds to insult them constantly by calling them 'retards'. The author is also a bully and i've seen them reply to someone saying that written them into the story negatively to embarrass them. This person seems to have a lot of issues, lack of confidence? Or just a simply jumped up bully thinking they are better than they actually are. Either way the author is very toxic.

Out of all the fanfics I’ve seen, this is by far the most original and interesting. The plot is great, the characters are well developed, and the grammar is as fluent as it gets. From what I’ve seen, the update frequency is great as well. Keep up the good work, Author.

I know the standards for novels here at rock bottom, but I didn't expect one of the top fictions to be such trash. It's just another reincarnated baby that already walks and talks at the age of 1 lol, Self Insert that thinks he can write a better Naruto because he is angry due to obsessing himself with plotholes. So much for a better Naruto, author(Self Insert) thinks just because he knows hand seals he can immediately preform those jutsu and that clones can regenerate chakra and make infinite clones ROFL. They can also take punches and heal hahaha, anyway I've read about 4-5 chaps which is 2 too much.

I like this story so far. I had become fed up with stories starting in Konoha. And the way some fanfics show konoha filled with good guys who help the MC is unreal. I mean we saw the anime or read manga through Naruto's perspective of ofcourse we're gonna see them as good guy. But not everything as it seems. Nothing is black and white. Humans operate in the gray zone. Just because someone is good to naruto doesn't mean they are good guys.

The start is like must other naruto fanfic mc gets reborn not renacarnated. In the naruto world but by the age of 1 his already got everything in the bag, he knows just about everything and even teaches jonins how to improve their jutsu's. But all of this takes place in war time. Which makes this weird how no one wonders how a one year old knows all of this in a world where theirs techniques to mind control and body steal. I think this has more potential. The biggest downer to this fanfic would be how aggressive the authors response is to criticism, he directly insult the reviewer by calling them insults and saying everything they say is wrong even if the place you got the info from was the original manga. As an author from royal road, this type of author who attacks his audience gives us a bad after taste. But anyways if you like naruto fanfic i say give it a try if you like the first 13chapter you'll most likely enjoy the rest. If you didn't it's best to move on.

As a fan of naruto myself, i like your story, i really do! So i will give you this 5star for making it likable... Xd Keep it up and don't drop it halfway!! \(^.^)/ …...... ........... ................ ...................... .......................... ....................................

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Thought id give a review. I won't mention your grammar because youve already stated that your learning but first and foremost your chapters state you have an "Editor" which is higjly unlikely because a middle schooler could fix the grammar issues present. The characters are really base and have no actual depth you take 1 percent of a person and make it a 100. The story is half rant and half OP mc. You continously complain about naruto while writing a story you deem as "better" than naruto. Theres a reason your not Kirishima. To counter your argument about naruto, you state that the story is full of plotholes. Chakra is meant to be an energy in all living beings and handsigns are meant to focus the energy into certain forms or affinities. Near the end of the story all the antagonists had reached a state of understanding that superseded regular shinobi so stop spouting bull****. The MC is just a version of yourself that you wish to be. 5 languages? You havnt even finished 2. Anger issues? In check but apparently in the story its okay to be angry all the time. You just want to live in a fictional world and wrote one of the worst fan fictions inserting yourself just to do so. Being an author is more than just writing. Its understanding and being open to what a story really is and adapting yourself to it. As stated before your characters are empty driven by a single emotion when a human being is a multitude of emotions and actions. Theres so much more to writing you havn't even begun to understand. If writing is what you want to do then please go and study to make yourself be the best you can. You seem to a person who just thinks theyre already the best.

Its a really good story and also is consistant with the timeline which is problem in most of the other fanfics. And there are only minimal grammatical errors. So as of now I recommend reading this. Trust me you won't regret anything other than lower number of chapters and a small plothole. ..... Will it be a harem or not Will there be materials "For Academic Purposes" Will the double updates continue ..... To find out more I'll keep myself lurking in these areas BTW author reply if you can

Of the fanfics on this site that I have checked out, this is definitely one of the ones that has a much more interesting plot, is better developed, and has interesting mechanics. Of the chapters I read, I found myself engrossed, and wanting to see more! Perhaps this is partly because I'm a Naruto fan, but, well, what can you do? :)

Everyone but the MC seems a little too retarded. No one can notice an untrained one year old who should know nothing about being a ninja with maybe a little bit of chakra training all of a sudden know everything there is about being a ninja without training. It looks like people only reviewed it high because oh the litrpg elements. Nothin else stands out.

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... I really like the book but... It just went from wow that cool to wtf he becoming a kidnapping psycho that muders innocence people. For what power? Or for fun?... It hard to tell now really.. And it also going to become a harem it seems and that I personally don't like. And if you think about it will the women he so calls loves not hate him if she knew he had feeling for someone else. And been killing people for no real reason and the whole taking a baby out of a women stomach.. Is also out there... If I wanted to read something like this I would redownload Psycho in Naruto world something like that is called. And it just how it sounds a guy *****ing abd blaming the word and he just goes and start killing people from not even the age of 2.. So ya.. Going to drop this.. Like it while it lasted at least.