Kingdoms of Dust: Rebuilding The Nation
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"Better to reign in Hell than serve in Heaven"
In the early 1800s, the prosperous nation of Ethereo was torn apart by a civil war that ended the monarchy and led to the formation of five kingdoms.
The kingdoms, each with its leadership and ideology, are now constantly struggling to reunite the nation under their rule.
As the war rages on, the question remains:
Who will come out on top and reign supreme in this battle for power?
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Volume 1 : Everybody Wants to rule the world.
- 1Introduction: The five kingdoms1yr
- 2Preparations of Battle1yr
- 3Home and Family1yr
- 4A Soldier is Never Off Duty.1yr
- 5Taking Off.1yr
- 6The Noble Woman1yr
- 7The battle of Chess and Life1yr
- 8The battle of Port Trafalgar1yr
- 9The Battle of Port Trafalgar-Round-21yr
- 10A Tight situation.1yr
- 11March to the Capital.1yr
- 12The Fall of A General.1yr
- 13Those Who Don't take Risk can't Win any Battles.1yr
- 14One real choice.1yr
- 15Scorch1yr
- 16Burning Forest and Hearts1yr
- 17Sneaky1yr
- 18Past and Present1yr
- 19Betrayal1yr
- 20Trust and Pride.1yr
- 21Outsmarting the enemy.1yr
- 22It all ends with me1yr
Volume 2 : The True Nature of War.
- 1Introduction: The five kingdoms1yr
- 2Preparations of Battle1yr
- 3Home and Family1yr
- 4A Soldier is Never Off Duty.1yr
- 5Taking Off.1yr
- 6The Noble Woman1yr
- 7The battle of Chess and Life1yr
- 8The battle of Port Trafalgar1yr
- 9The Battle of Port Trafalgar-Round-21yr
- 10A Tight situation.1yr
- 11March to the Capital.1yr
- 12The Fall of A General.1yr
- 13Those Who Don't take Risk can't Win any Battles.1yr
- 14One real choice.1yr
- 15Scorch1yr
- 16Burning Forest and Hearts1yr
- 17Sneaky1yr
- 18Past and Present1yr
- 19Betrayal1yr
- 20Trust and Pride.1yr
- 21Outsmarting the enemy.1yr
- 22It all ends with me1yr
- 23A Mysterious Speaker.1yr
- 24The Hardcore Mission1yr
- 25Confidence Brings Strength1yr
- 26Engineering the Situation.1yr
- 27Desperation and Misery1yr
- 28The Twisted Words1yr
- 29The Chaos Elements1yr
- 30Fear is The Greatest Motivator1yr
- 31The Defence of The Castle1yr
- 32Final Preparations1yr
- 33The Night of Light and Death1yr
- 34The Ones Who Walk In the Shadows1yr
- 35Revelations1yr
- 36Bat-Shit Insane!1yr
- 37The Peak of Hell.1yr
- 38Battle Altar1yr
- 39All War is Deception.1yr
- 40Loose Ends1yr
- 41The Ones Who Stand Tall.1yr
- 42A Multifaced Attack1yr
- 43Trust1yr
- 44A Day Before.1yr
- 45Curses1yr
- 46All Set For the Show.1yr
- 47Seeing Someone Important1yr
- 48Time Lapse.1yr
- 49Becoming Someone's Legacy1yr
- 50Tears1yr
- 51Yuuka's story vol 2 notes (Extras)1yr
Volume 3 : The First Ace.
- 1Introduction: The five kingdoms1yr
- 2Preparations of Battle1yr
- 3Home and Family1yr
- 4A Soldier is Never Off Duty.1yr
- 5Taking Off.1yr
- 6The Noble Woman1yr
- 7The battle of Chess and Life1yr
- 8The battle of Port Trafalgar1yr
- 9The Battle of Port Trafalgar-Round-21yr
- 10A Tight situation.1yr
- 11March to the Capital.1yr
- 12The Fall of A General.1yr
- 13Those Who Don't take Risk can't Win any Battles.1yr
- 14One real choice.1yr
- 15Scorch1yr
- 16Burning Forest and Hearts1yr
- 17Sneaky1yr
- 18Past and Present1yr
- 19Betrayal1yr
- 20Trust and Pride.1yr
- 21Outsmarting the enemy.1yr
- 22It all ends with me1yr
- 23A Mysterious Speaker.1yr
- 24The Hardcore Mission1yr
- 25Confidence Brings Strength1yr
- 26Engineering the Situation.1yr
- 27Desperation and Misery1yr
- 28The Twisted Words1yr
- 29The Chaos Elements1yr
- 30Fear is The Greatest Motivator1yr
- 31The Defence of The Castle1yr
- 32Final Preparations1yr
- 33The Night of Light and Death1yr
- 34The Ones Who Walk In the Shadows1yr
- 35Revelations1yr
- 36Bat-Shit Insane!1yr
- 37The Peak of Hell.1yr
- 38Battle Altar1yr
- 39All War is Deception.1yr
- 40Loose Ends1yr
- 41The Ones Who Stand Tall.1yr
- 42A Multifaced Attack1yr
- 43Trust1yr
- 44A Day Before.1yr
- 45Curses1yr
- 46All Set For the Show.1yr
- 47Seeing Someone Important1yr
- 48Time Lapse.1yr
- 49Becoming Someone's Legacy1yr
- 50Tears1yr
- 51Yuuka's story vol 2 notes (Extras)1yr
- 52Brother1yr
- 53It's ALL LOSE!!!1yr
- 54MasterMind.1yr
- 55A Drink Before Battle1yr
- 56Cold Dive1yr
- 57Burn Baby Burn!1yr
- 58The Beginning of The End1yr
- 59A Question1yr
- 60Bursting The Doors1yr
- 61Total Panic!1yr
- 62Betrayal Never Comes From An Enemy1yr
- 63Infinite Layers1yr
- 64Successful Escape1yr
- 65The Battle Of Trafalgar- III1yr
- 66Harbour Brawl1yr
- 67I am Alive1yr
- 68Queen Side1yr
- 69Outsmarted.1yr
- 70One For All1yr
- 71Shining Light1yr
- 72Sniper Showdown.1yr
- 73The Die Hard1yr
- 74Bring You Down.1yr
- 75Years in The Making.1yr
- 76Commander vs Commander1yr
- 77The Final Chapter.1yr
- 78Author's and the Editor's Message1yr
Volume 4 : Iron Fist AND Hidden Dagger.
- 1Introduction: The five kingdoms1yr
- 2Preparations of Battle1yr
- 3Home and Family1yr
- 4A Soldier is Never Off Duty.1yr
- 5Taking Off.1yr
- 6The Noble Woman1yr
- 7The battle of Chess and Life1yr
- 8The battle of Port Trafalgar1yr
- 9The Battle of Port Trafalgar-Round-21yr
- 10A Tight situation.1yr
- 11March to the Capital.1yr
- 12The Fall of A General.1yr
- 13Those Who Don't take Risk can't Win any Battles.1yr
- 14One real choice.1yr
- 15Scorch1yr
- 16Burning Forest and Hearts1yr
- 17Sneaky1yr
- 18Past and Present1yr
- 19Betrayal1yr
- 20Trust and Pride.1yr
- 21Outsmarting the enemy.1yr
- 22It all ends with me1yr
- 23A Mysterious Speaker.1yr
- 24The Hardcore Mission1yr
- 25Confidence Brings Strength1yr
- 26Engineering the Situation.1yr
- 27Desperation and Misery1yr
- 28The Twisted Words1yr
- 29The Chaos Elements1yr
- 30Fear is The Greatest Motivator1yr
- 31The Defence of The Castle1yr
- 32Final Preparations1yr
- 33The Night of Light and Death1yr
- 34The Ones Who Walk In the Shadows1yr
- 35Revelations1yr
- 36Bat-Shit Insane!1yr
- 37The Peak of Hell.1yr
- 38Battle Altar1yr
- 39All War is Deception.1yr
- 40Loose Ends1yr
- 41The Ones Who Stand Tall.1yr
- 42A Multifaced Attack1yr
- 43Trust1yr
- 44A Day Before.1yr
- 45Curses1yr
- 46All Set For the Show.1yr
- 47Seeing Someone Important1yr
- 48Time Lapse.1yr
- 49Becoming Someone's Legacy1yr
- 50Tears1yr
- 51Yuuka's story vol 2 notes (Extras)1yr
- 52Brother1yr
- 53It's ALL LOSE!!!1yr
- 54MasterMind.1yr
- 55A Drink Before Battle1yr
- 56Cold Dive1yr
- 57Burn Baby Burn!1yr
- 58The Beginning of The End1yr
- 59A Question1yr
- 60Bursting The Doors1yr
- 61Total Panic!1yr
- 62Betrayal Never Comes From An Enemy1yr
- 63Infinite Layers1yr
- 64Successful Escape1yr
- 65The Battle Of Trafalgar- III1yr
- 66Harbour Brawl1yr
- 67I am Alive1yr
- 68Queen Side1yr
- 69Outsmarted.1yr
- 70One For All1yr
- 71Shining Light1yr
- 72Sniper Showdown.1yr
- 73The Die Hard1yr
- 74Bring You Down.1yr
- 75Years in The Making.1yr
- 76Commander vs Commander1yr
- 77The Final Chapter.1yr
- 78Author's and the Editor's Message1yr
- 79The Brittanian Empire's failure1yr
- 80Young Blood1yr
- 81The Assassins of Saxony.1yr
- 82Defending the Attack.1yr
- 83Birth OF True Evil.1yr
- 84The City is in Flames.1yr
- 85Earning the Trust.1yr
- 86The Legendary pirate.1yr
- 87Meeting The Legend.1yr
- 88The Pirate's way of fighitng.1yr
- 89A Stormy Battle1yr
- 90Climbing the Fortress.1yr
- 91Cold day Masscare.1yr
- 92Daggers and Black Flags1yr
- 93Battle Between Assasssins1yr
- 94Unstopable Fury.1yr
- 95Aftermath1yr
- 96A Visit to the Past.1yr
- 97A Visit to the Past-II1yr
- 98Preparing for Battle.1yr
- 99The True Ruler Of Britannia1yr
- 100Vol4 drafts.(Extras)1yr
Volume 5 : The World around us
- 1Introduction: The five kingdoms1yr
- 2Preparations of Battle1yr
- 3Home and Family1yr
- 4A Soldier is Never Off Duty.1yr
- 5Taking Off.1yr
- 6The Noble Woman1yr
- 7The battle of Chess and Life1yr
- 8The battle of Port Trafalgar1yr
- 9The Battle of Port Trafalgar-Round-21yr
- 10A Tight situation.1yr
- 11March to the Capital.1yr
- 12The Fall of A General.1yr
- 13Those Who Don't take Risk can't Win any Battles.1yr
- 14One real choice.1yr
- 15Scorch1yr
- 16Burning Forest and Hearts1yr
- 17Sneaky1yr
- 18Past and Present1yr
- 19Betrayal1yr
- 20Trust and Pride.1yr
- 21Outsmarting the enemy.1yr
- 22It all ends with me1yr
- 23A Mysterious Speaker.1yr
- 24The Hardcore Mission1yr
- 25Confidence Brings Strength1yr
- 26Engineering the Situation.1yr
- 27Desperation and Misery1yr
- 28The Twisted Words1yr
- 29The Chaos Elements1yr
- 30Fear is The Greatest Motivator1yr
- 31The Defence of The Castle1yr
- 32Final Preparations1yr
- 33The Night of Light and Death1yr
- 34The Ones Who Walk In the Shadows1yr
- 35Revelations1yr
- 36Bat-Shit Insane!1yr
- 37The Peak of Hell.1yr
- 38Battle Altar1yr
- 39All War is Deception.1yr
- 40Loose Ends1yr
- 41The Ones Who Stand Tall.1yr
- 42A Multifaced Attack1yr
- 43Trust1yr
- 44A Day Before.1yr
- 45Curses1yr
- 46All Set For the Show.1yr
- 47Seeing Someone Important1yr
- 48Time Lapse.1yr
- 49Becoming Someone's Legacy1yr
- 50Tears1yr
- 51Yuuka's story vol 2 notes (Extras)1yr
- 52Brother1yr
- 53It's ALL LOSE!!!1yr
- 54MasterMind.1yr
- 55A Drink Before Battle1yr
- 56Cold Dive1yr
- 57Burn Baby Burn!1yr
- 58The Beginning of The End1yr
- 59A Question1yr
- 60Bursting The Doors1yr
- 61Total Panic!1yr
- 62Betrayal Never Comes From An Enemy1yr
- 63Infinite Layers1yr
- 64Successful Escape1yr
- 65The Battle Of Trafalgar- III1yr
- 66Harbour Brawl1yr
- 67I am Alive1yr
- 68Queen Side1yr
- 69Outsmarted.1yr
- 70One For All1yr
- 71Shining Light1yr
- 72Sniper Showdown.1yr
- 73The Die Hard1yr
- 74Bring You Down.1yr
- 75Years in The Making.1yr
- 76Commander vs Commander1yr
- 77The Final Chapter.1yr
- 78Author's and the Editor's Message1yr
- 79The Brittanian Empire's failure1yr
- 80Young Blood1yr
- 81The Assassins of Saxony.1yr
- 82Defending the Attack.1yr
- 83Birth OF True Evil.1yr
- 84The City is in Flames.1yr
- 85Earning the Trust.1yr
- 86The Legendary pirate.1yr
- 87Meeting The Legend.1yr
- 88The Pirate's way of fighitng.1yr
- 89A Stormy Battle1yr
- 90Climbing the Fortress.1yr
- 91Cold day Masscare.1yr
- 92Daggers and Black Flags1yr
- 93Battle Between Assasssins1yr
- 94Unstopable Fury.1yr
- 95Aftermath1yr
- 96A Visit to the Past.1yr
- 97A Visit to the Past-II1yr
- 98Preparing for Battle.1yr
- 99The True Ruler Of Britannia1yr
- 100Vol4 drafts.(Extras)1yr
- 101Conquering The Masses.1yr
- 102Gentleman on the Train.1yr
- 103Gentleman on the Train - II1yr
- 104Lady On The Train.1yr
- 105Lady on the Train-21yr
- 106Racing Heartbeat1yr
- 107Painful Reality.1yr
- 108Lies1yr
- 109The Hunter is back on the hunt.1yr
- 110Field Harvesting1yr
- 111Slaves.1yr
- 112No Longer Dream.1yr
- 113Time Passes1yr
- 114Forgiveness Brings No Happiness1yr
- 115He is the King of Seas.1yr
- 116Hearts Of Glasses.1yr
- 117Airheads- A Necklace and Past.1yr
- 118Behind the Scenes.1yr
- 119Attack on the Lord.1yr
- 120History Lesson1yr
- 121The Conspirators.1yr
- 122A Old Man.1yr
- 123Vol 5- Extras. God Loves All.1yr
Volume 6 : The Future and the Past.
- 1Introduction: The five kingdoms1yr
- 2Preparations of Battle1yr
- 3Home and Family1yr
- 4A Soldier is Never Off Duty.1yr
- 5Taking Off.1yr
- 6The Noble Woman1yr
- 7The battle of Chess and Life1yr
- 8The battle of Port Trafalgar1yr
- 9The Battle of Port Trafalgar-Round-21yr
- 10A Tight situation.1yr
- 11March to the Capital.1yr
- 12The Fall of A General.1yr
- 13Those Who Don't take Risk can't Win any Battles.1yr
- 14One real choice.1yr
- 15Scorch1yr
- 16Burning Forest and Hearts1yr
- 17Sneaky1yr
- 18Past and Present1yr
- 19Betrayal1yr
- 20Trust and Pride.1yr
- 21Outsmarting the enemy.1yr
- 22It all ends with me1yr
- 23A Mysterious Speaker.1yr
- 24The Hardcore Mission1yr
- 25Confidence Brings Strength1yr
- 26Engineering the Situation.1yr
- 27Desperation and Misery1yr
- 28The Twisted Words1yr
- 29The Chaos Elements1yr
- 30Fear is The Greatest Motivator1yr
- 31The Defence of The Castle1yr
- 32Final Preparations1yr
- 33The Night of Light and Death1yr
- 34The Ones Who Walk In the Shadows1yr
- 35Revelations1yr
- 36Bat-Shit Insane!1yr
- 37The Peak of Hell.1yr
- 38Battle Altar1yr
- 39All War is Deception.1yr
- 40Loose Ends1yr
- 41The Ones Who Stand Tall.1yr
- 42A Multifaced Attack1yr
- 43Trust1yr
- 44A Day Before.1yr
- 45Curses1yr
- 46All Set For the Show.1yr
- 47Seeing Someone Important1yr
- 48Time Lapse.1yr
- 49Becoming Someone's Legacy1yr
- 50Tears1yr
- 51Yuuka's story vol 2 notes (Extras)1yr
- 52Brother1yr
- 53It's ALL LOSE!!!1yr
- 54MasterMind.1yr
- 55A Drink Before Battle1yr
- 56Cold Dive1yr
- 57Burn Baby Burn!1yr
- 58The Beginning of The End1yr
- 59A Question1yr
- 60Bursting The Doors1yr
- 61Total Panic!1yr
- 62Betrayal Never Comes From An Enemy1yr
- 63Infinite Layers1yr
- 64Successful Escape1yr
- 65The Battle Of Trafalgar- III1yr
- 66Harbour Brawl1yr
- 67I am Alive1yr
- 68Queen Side1yr
- 69Outsmarted.1yr
- 70One For All1yr
- 71Shining Light1yr
- 72Sniper Showdown.1yr
- 73The Die Hard1yr
- 74Bring You Down.1yr
- 75Years in The Making.1yr
- 76Commander vs Commander1yr
- 77The Final Chapter.1yr
- 78Author's and the Editor's Message1yr
- 79The Brittanian Empire's failure1yr
- 80Young Blood1yr
- 81The Assassins of Saxony.1yr
- 82Defending the Attack.1yr
- 83Birth OF True Evil.1yr
- 84The City is in Flames.1yr
- 85Earning the Trust.1yr
- 86The Legendary pirate.1yr
- 87Meeting The Legend.1yr
- 88The Pirate's way of fighitng.1yr
- 89A Stormy Battle1yr
- 90Climbing the Fortress.1yr
- 91Cold day Masscare.1yr
- 92Daggers and Black Flags1yr
- 93Battle Between Assasssins1yr
- 94Unstopable Fury.1yr
- 95Aftermath1yr
- 96A Visit to the Past.1yr
- 97A Visit to the Past-II1yr
- 98Preparing for Battle.1yr
- 99The True Ruler Of Britannia1yr
- 100Vol4 drafts.(Extras)1yr
- 101Conquering The Masses.1yr
- 102Gentleman on the Train.1yr
- 103Gentleman on the Train - II1yr
- 104Lady On The Train.1yr
- 105Lady on the Train-21yr
- 106Racing Heartbeat1yr
- 107Painful Reality.1yr
- 108Lies1yr
- 109The Hunter is back on the hunt.1yr
- 110Field Harvesting1yr
- 111Slaves.1yr
- 112No Longer Dream.1yr
- 113Time Passes1yr
- 114Forgiveness Brings No Happiness1yr
- 115He is the King of Seas.1yr
- 116Hearts Of Glasses.1yr
- 117Airheads- A Necklace and Past.1yr
- 118Behind the Scenes.1yr
- 119Attack on the Lord.1yr
- 120History Lesson1yr
- 121The Conspirators.1yr
- 122A Old Man.1yr
- 123Vol 5- Extras. God Loves All.1yr
- 124The Past remembered.1yr
- 125Plans of The Future.1yr
- 126A Day of Relief.1yr
- 127The Market.1yr
- 128Thief's Heaven.9mth
- 129Times Change.7mth
- 130Poems And Past.7mth
- 131First Sparks.5mth
- 132Step By Step.4mth
- 133Catching the fire.4mth
- 134A Planned Assault.4mth
- 135The Wicked.4mth
- 136Worth.3mth
- 137Lone Wolf and Pack.3mth
- 138Brave.3mth
- 139Choices.2mth
- 140History.2mth
- 141Riding the Winds.2mth
- 142Another Sudden Appearance.2mth
- 143Storm Approaches.2mth
- 144Through Dust.2mth
- 145Raise Hell.2mth
- 146Devil2mth
- 147The Gold Pound City.2mth
- 148Past Forgotten.2mth
- 149Remembrance and Reflection.1mth
- 150Endure.1mth
- 151Mission.1mth
- 152Search1mth
- 153Consequences.1mth
- 154Rainy Day Massacre29d
- 155Gambit.28d
- 156Reunion.25d
- 157The Tale.24d
- 158Discussion.23d
- 159Display.22d
- 160Thoughts about the Story.21d
Volume 7 : Ambitions.
- 1Introduction: The five kingdoms1yr
- 2Preparations of Battle1yr
- 3Home and Family1yr
- 4A Soldier is Never Off Duty.1yr
- 5Taking Off.1yr
- 6The Noble Woman1yr
- 7The battle of Chess and Life1yr
- 8The battle of Port Trafalgar1yr
- 9The Battle of Port Trafalgar-Round-21yr
- 10A Tight situation.1yr
- 11March to the Capital.1yr
- 12The Fall of A General.1yr
- 13Those Who Don't take Risk can't Win any Battles.1yr
- 14One real choice.1yr
- 15Scorch1yr
- 16Burning Forest and Hearts1yr
- 17Sneaky1yr
- 18Past and Present1yr
- 19Betrayal1yr
- 20Trust and Pride.1yr
- 21Outsmarting the enemy.1yr
- 22It all ends with me1yr
- 23A Mysterious Speaker.1yr
- 24The Hardcore Mission1yr
- 25Confidence Brings Strength1yr
- 26Engineering the Situation.1yr
- 27Desperation and Misery1yr
- 28The Twisted Words1yr
- 29The Chaos Elements1yr
- 30Fear is The Greatest Motivator1yr
- 31The Defence of The Castle1yr
- 32Final Preparations1yr
- 33The Night of Light and Death1yr
- 34The Ones Who Walk In the Shadows1yr
- 35Revelations1yr
- 36Bat-Shit Insane!1yr
- 37The Peak of Hell.1yr
- 38Battle Altar1yr
- 39All War is Deception.1yr
- 40Loose Ends1yr
- 41The Ones Who Stand Tall.1yr
- 42A Multifaced Attack1yr
- 43Trust1yr
- 44A Day Before.1yr
- 45Curses1yr
- 46All Set For the Show.1yr
- 47Seeing Someone Important1yr
- 48Time Lapse.1yr
- 49Becoming Someone's Legacy1yr
- 50Tears1yr
- 51Yuuka's story vol 2 notes (Extras)1yr
- 52Brother1yr
- 53It's ALL LOSE!!!1yr
- 54MasterMind.1yr
- 55A Drink Before Battle1yr
- 56Cold Dive1yr
- 57Burn Baby Burn!1yr
- 58The Beginning of The End1yr
- 59A Question1yr
- 60Bursting The Doors1yr
- 61Total Panic!1yr
- 62Betrayal Never Comes From An Enemy1yr
- 63Infinite Layers1yr
- 64Successful Escape1yr
- 65The Battle Of Trafalgar- III1yr
- 66Harbour Brawl1yr
- 67I am Alive1yr
- 68Queen Side1yr
- 69Outsmarted.1yr
- 70One For All1yr
- 71Shining Light1yr
- 72Sniper Showdown.1yr
- 73The Die Hard1yr
- 74Bring You Down.1yr
- 75Years in The Making.1yr
- 76Commander vs Commander1yr
- 77The Final Chapter.1yr
- 78Author's and the Editor's Message1yr
- 79The Brittanian Empire's failure1yr
- 80Young Blood1yr
- 81The Assassins of Saxony.1yr
- 82Defending the Attack.1yr
- 83Birth OF True Evil.1yr
- 84The City is in Flames.1yr
- 85Earning the Trust.1yr
- 86The Legendary pirate.1yr
- 87Meeting The Legend.1yr
- 88The Pirate's way of fighitng.1yr
- 89A Stormy Battle1yr
- 90Climbing the Fortress.1yr
- 91Cold day Masscare.1yr
- 92Daggers and Black Flags1yr
- 93Battle Between Assasssins1yr
- 94Unstopable Fury.1yr
- 95Aftermath1yr
- 96A Visit to the Past.1yr
- 97A Visit to the Past-II1yr
- 98Preparing for Battle.1yr
- 99The True Ruler Of Britannia1yr
- 100Vol4 drafts.(Extras)1yr
- 101Conquering The Masses.1yr
- 102Gentleman on the Train.1yr
- 103Gentleman on the Train - II1yr
- 104Lady On The Train.1yr
- 105Lady on the Train-21yr
- 106Racing Heartbeat1yr
- 107Painful Reality.1yr
- 108Lies1yr
- 109The Hunter is back on the hunt.1yr
- 110Field Harvesting1yr
- 111Slaves.1yr
- 112No Longer Dream.1yr
- 113Time Passes1yr
- 114Forgiveness Brings No Happiness1yr
- 115He is the King of Seas.1yr
- 116Hearts Of Glasses.1yr
- 117Airheads- A Necklace and Past.1yr
- 118Behind the Scenes.1yr
- 119Attack on the Lord.1yr
- 120History Lesson1yr
- 121The Conspirators.1yr
- 122A Old Man.1yr
- 123Vol 5- Extras. God Loves All.1yr
- 124The Past remembered.1yr
- 125Plans of The Future.1yr
- 126A Day of Relief.1yr
- 127The Market.1yr
- 128Thief's Heaven.9mth
- 129Times Change.7mth
- 130Poems And Past.7mth
- 131First Sparks.5mth
- 132Step By Step.4mth
- 133Catching the fire.4mth
- 134A Planned Assault.4mth
- 135The Wicked.4mth
- 136Worth.3mth
- 137Lone Wolf and Pack.3mth
- 138Brave.3mth
- 139Choices.2mth
- 140History.2mth
- 141Riding the Winds.2mth
- 142Another Sudden Appearance.2mth
- 143Storm Approaches.2mth
- 144Through Dust.2mth
- 145Raise Hell.2mth
- 146Devil2mth
- 147The Gold Pound City.2mth
- 148Past Forgotten.2mth
- 149Remembrance and Reflection.1mth
- 150Endure.1mth
- 151Mission.1mth
- 152Search1mth
- 153Consequences.1mth
- 154Rainy Day Massacre29d
- 155Gambit.28d
- 156Reunion.25d
- 157The Tale.24d
- 158Discussion.23d
- 159Display.22d
- 160Thoughts about the Story.21d
- 161Time8d
- 162Life.7d
- 163Prey6d
- 164Prison.2d
- 165A Play14h
As far as i can tell it is a good story. No major errors in Grammar or story, no real plotholes that are obvious. Not for me, but if you like the Tags give it a read.
The story is good. Not a lot of problems in grammer and story, The character design seems to be the best. The problem is with the updates. The author seems to rarely posts these days. Like, can I get a reply to when the next (non filler chapter) is gonna come by? I mean you should actually make the filler a part of the story, cuz it good . The posting schedule used to be 1 chapter per day but now it is like 1 chapter a month. The rest is perfect, I've been reading since the 11th chapter and gonna continue till the end.
The story is pretty solid, It was really good, there are two problems i would like to address 1:Consistency[img=update] 2:Pacing this is all
After reading the first 3 chapters, in my opinion, it didn’t show a good introduction to the story and what is going on.