Ella Smith
“What made you decide to grow up? You are tired of what life has given to you?” Darifa asks with a bit of sacarsm. “You have been so naive.”
"Naive," Ella shook her head dejected after another disappointment. She had been on the run for as long as she could remember, not sure of what chased after her. Sometimes she feels that the first thirteen years of her life was a dream, a house to call her own, family, wealth, and influence all disappeared like they never existed. “I am tired of running, it is time to go back and get answers,"She nods. “I have decided to give life what it has given to me too.”
“How do you intend on paying back?” Asma asks out of curiosity.
“I will pay back in tenfolds, be it pain or happiness. I will pay it back in the folds.”
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An interesting, captivating and unique storyline.@symply Laura definitely knows how to capture the readers' attentions..... funny, delightful.. with a side of danger all rolled into one neat little package.
Come to think of it. .this is wow! Nice storyline, so catchy to the eyes. So worth to feed my eyes and how it contained my thoughts is something compelling!
such an amazing story so far. It's a type that I am fond of. The plot is very interesting that drags you in. writing is outstanding. Keep up the great work.
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This is very nice and you can definitely tell the bond between the daughter and father. One thing though is the capitalization could use some work but besides that, its alright
This story has a really deep plot, the characters are very complex, their motives are clear, and their backstories are meaningful. The atmosphere that is set suits the situation really well, the only thing I would like to see in the future is some more light-hearted moments, some more hope to keep the readers going.
I love where the part it says about her legs and such and the way the story tells was clear and impressive as if it happened in real life, the drama is real and the story was realistic. Hope you make more chapters fellow novelist.
I was a little putt off by the synopsis but when I read the chapter I realized how wrong i was. It's a good idea and a nice plot. keep up the good work author 😌👍
that was an amazing fort chapter even the title shows great potential I can't wait for more so I encourage you to keep writing cause you got my support
The beginning of this story got me hooked,❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️. Can't lie about the author's writing skills, it's 100% accurate so I'm definitely rating five stars 🌹,
The writing is awesome, the updates steady, the story is amazing, the characters are interesting, and the world background is up to standards for a story like this. I would have preferred to see a bit more description about the setting and what characters looked like. The grammar also could use some minor adjustments but outside of that it is a splendid tale. I welcome the author to read my story "Avatar: Macai's Journey". Cheers
First two chapters are written with strong emotions that the readers could definitely feel, every word giving us raw emotions. Although, the writing style can be improved, proper capitalizations, commas and periods but it doesn't in any way degrade the quality of the plot. Great job! 👏🏻
This is my first time on this app and my first story at that and it has been captivating and interesting...............keep up the good work🤗🤗