I am in Dragon Ball, as a clone of Goku and Vegeta made by Dr. Gero. To be honest, this is going to be awesome and horrifying, isn't it? On the plus side, Android 21 might probably exist. I guess I have a goal now.
The novel would have been much better if the author had not included the other versions of the MC from other universes (DC, Invincible, etc.), I literally skipped paragraphs every time Connor appeared.
6 months ago
13
Eternal_devil
It doesn’t make sense to me ,this just feels forced . If he’s the strongest just go namik
For the dragon balls
a year ago
13
Lordmonke09
it was good until you started introducing the othe soul parts and you really did not need to do that because there is so much stuff in dragonball so why introduce other animes
3 months ago
5
CaioBR
Very good, it's very rare to see a good Dragon Ball fanfic nowadays, this one is at least in the top 5.Very good, it's very rare to see a good Dragon Ball fanfic nowadays, this one is at least in the top 5.
10 months ago
5
DaoistElxnbZ
When will the Saiyan journey to power and lonely Kryptonian be released again? It's been a while without releasing chapters ? .................................
10 months ago
4
Zero_Profile
i tried reading this but to be honest the idea is good but the novel became a drama. the synopsis is not close to what this is. the time skips are every where and relationships are kind just there. I found myself skipping loads of text because of monologue questions about direction. pretty much fluff to pad character count. Author don't get me wrong I don't knock your effort but when you're side characters become more interesting than your MC their is a problem
3 months ago
3
SilverEmpyrean
it was good right up to chp30...then it was like thar in the blue.hell.is going on?!
6 months ago
3
ARSENAL_101
It is a very good story but I would like to see the stories of all the other 6 fragments of his sole......DC one has good potential for lemon wish fulfilment OP Mc......so I hope the author writes about it......also more frequent updates are appreciated.
9 months ago
3
Gabriel_Aires
So why not merge the Super Saiyan 4 and Super Saiyan God transformations ?
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10 months ago
3
Areswargod99
I really think you should rewrite the superman
20 days ago
1
DaoistElxnbZ
Author, I think it's best that you finish your already released stories before you start posting new stories because some haven't been released for months.
5 months ago
1
DaoistElxnbZ
Then the omnitrix wielder will launch when.................................................,..................................................................?
7 months ago
1
IMDOOMED
I genuinely adore this novel; it is truly the epitome of excellence. However, I am inclined to express a heartfelt disappointment regarding its brevity.
Are there Lemons???
The novel would have been much better if the author had not included the other versions of the MC from other universes (DC, Invincible, etc.), I literally skipped paragraphs every time Connor appeared.
It doesn’t make sense to me ,this just feels forced . If he’s the strongest just go namik For the dragon balls
it was good until you started introducing the othe soul parts and you really did not need to do that because there is so much stuff in dragonball so why introduce other animes
Very good, it's very rare to see a good Dragon Ball fanfic nowadays, this one is at least in the top 5.Very good, it's very rare to see a good Dragon Ball fanfic nowadays, this one is at least in the top 5.
When will the Saiyan journey to power and lonely Kryptonian be released again? It's been a while without releasing chapters ? .................................
i tried reading this but to be honest the idea is good but the novel became a drama. the synopsis is not close to what this is. the time skips are every where and relationships are kind just there. I found myself skipping loads of text because of monologue questions about direction. pretty much fluff to pad character count. Author don't get me wrong I don't knock your effort but when you're side characters become more interesting than your MC their is a problem
it was good right up to chp30...then it was like thar in the blue.hell.is going on?!
It is a very good story but I would like to see the stories of all the other 6 fragments of his sole......DC one has good potential for lemon wish fulfilment OP Mc......so I hope the author writes about it......also more frequent updates are appreciated.
So why not merge the Super Saiyan 4 and Super Saiyan God transformations ? ............................................................................................
I really think you should rewrite the superman
Author, I think it's best that you finish your already released stories before you start posting new stories because some haven't been released for months.
Then the omnitrix wielder will launch when.................................................,..................................................................?
I genuinely adore this novel; it is truly the epitome of excellence. However, I am inclined to express a heartfelt disappointment regarding its brevity.
good read 👍..............................