Flower On The Ash
What! I knew he would be scheming something to torture me. I looked at him with narrowed eyes and he winked at me. I suddenly looked away to confirm that no one saw him doing that. I was blessed. My father was discussing something with my stepmother and Sophia. I glared at him and he silently chuckled.
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Annabell Evans (protagonist), who was badly treated by her step-mother and step-sister, falls into the trap laid by her so-called elder sister. Her sister drugged her in a hotel and brought her to a room where she had a night-stand with Alexander Wilson. She left the man asking him to forget about that night and pretend as if they had never met. She leave the hotel but Alex gets interested in her. Fate brought them closer and they got united.
But would this be all? Was there someone targeting them? Would their life always be happy and full of love? Anna must keep calm and face the challenges that are going to fall upon her. She will have to make herself stronger to keep her close ones safe and happy. It's about affection, desire, sacrifice, protection. Indescribable feelings that one has to face in the thrilling journey of love.
Nice plot and interesting to read. I love CEO and romance stories. So far so great. Would like to read more from you. Good luck author 💞💞😊😊
I love the storyline❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️. Keep it going✍️✍️✍️✍️.
I love how the plot is going on and how it's well written. I'm kind of excited about how it will progress with the female lead. Good luck author..👍
The pacing of the story is good. There is a clear and defined relationship between the different characters. Notes to the author: There are several grammatical issues, and jumps from an action or moment to an internal dialogue within the same sentence and it can be throw the reader out of the story. The first chapter could use some love to be a little more attention grabbing. This story is very much like all the rest out there with this set up, I recommend finding something to make it unique among the rest and introducing it early.
The story, although seems fast-paced, would definitely be a wonderful read for whoever is into these kinds of novel plots. At first, the author had me feeling very bad for the main character, but the way all the events and everything in general sped up so quickly like that kind of threw me off. This would definitely become an amazing novel if there was some more illustration and more spread-out events. Otherwise, keep up the great work :)
I love stories that start off like this. Character design was great. They have much depth. I can see them growing into very active and vivid characters. I would like to see a little more descriptive words for their features however. The flow of the chapters were very good. It didn’t jump around and we also got to read the ML side of the story, which is stellar. At times the author does skip from 1st and 3rd point of view and there are a few word errors but it was not enough to pull me from my immersion. Very good start!
Hmmm angst 🥴🥴🥴 I love stories with angst and drama.. we need more of it heheheheheh[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Great work author love the short chapters, the characters are great the story development is great too. Character design Astar .....[img=recommend]
The story is good, I suggest to the author to make the first chapter much more interesting but overall, the story is good, Please continue this amazing work of yours, it's sure to be a success someday. And I'm waiting for the next chapter!!
i really love this book kudos to the author I can't wait for you to upload the rest of the chapters and I'm ready to support this story I'm your biggest fan!! 😚
I just finished reading your novel (I mean not alll the chapters but after reading 10+ chapters) and I must say, your storytelling skills are truly remarkable. The way you were able to captivate me from beginning to end had me eagerly turning page after page, completely absorbed in the world you created. Your attention to detail and the way you intricately woven the plot together left me in awe.
It's an interesting book, cleanly written and fast paced. The plot starts out quite dark (author, consider adding a trigger warning to chapter 2, and other scenes later), and there's a lot of scheming and plotting - so those who are into that vibe will love this book.
Fast paced and interesting. This story becomes better and better with each passing chapter. By the end of one chapter, you will be forced to click on the next one. Waiting for more chapters!