Creati Hero: All-Father[Completed]
Mokami Yaoyorozu, born as Momo's twin brother with advanced Quirk that allows him to create even living things. With the ability to change the structure of everything, he tries to become a hero in his second life.
But one day he sees his father's dark deeds and realizes rich people all around the globe are part of something big and dark. To protect his family and innocent, he starts to get stronger while scheme through their ranks, so he can destroy them from within.
Join Mokami in his exciting life!
What to expect;
Strong Romance; MC is romantic type of a guy that abhors to use women. There will be many women around him but he will woo them with love.
Harem(Incest); There will be many women from the anime and some OCs. Momo and their mother will also be part of the harem.
Slow Pace; It is not going to be meeting and fucking in an instant. I like to take my time and build up the romance before getting into the action so if you are looking for quick fucks, this story is not for you.
Strong but not Overpowered MC; He is always stronger than average but not omnipotent. Expect him to fallback and lose things just to rise on his feet stronger. Although the main theme is not power, the novel has some.
Some dark truths about world that may trigger you. Abuse of minors and worse. Never done by MC, will never be done MC but as MC discovers more about the Dark Organization, the nastier it will get. If you are a snowflake, I don't recommend you to read.
For now the publish schedule is a chapter on weekdays and two chapters on weekends.
Mc is Royal Blood & he will keep it pure with power.
I think the mc needs to be older in the scene where he rewires his fathers mind. like 9-12 NOT 4. it gives time for his quirk to plausibly awaken like that(and makes it feel like he earned it.) You also immediately removed the only antagonist present removing all suspension for the period. I understand you want to audience to hate father but that'd be better achieved by having the abuse build up rather than having some mean words and this incident only where you just slapped the title of 'epstein product consumer' on him. The real issue is how mature the mc is talking to mother after this, literally giving her domestic abuse counselling. 1. this is eerie af and mc should act like a genius for his age, not an adult comforting a woman as a 4 year old. this is completely unreadable, any adult would be creeped the f out having a child say this. 2. Momo can't even talk properly yet (which makes the mc a creep instead and ruins any development the incident could have had on her character and the mc's relationship. You could improve this with minimal editing and maybe some earlier chapters to demonize father better than just outing him as a pedo. Anyhoozle, great novel concept—only reason I'm actually giving feedback. 5 stars if serious early issues addressed.
I have about 100 draft chapters and will continue to write, so you can expect a long read from this novel. Please read the auxiliary chapters to know what to expect from this novel lest you are triggered.
Story isn’t bad and neither is the grammar but i really disliked the main character’s personality.
First you need to understand father of the mc is a good guy in the canon ( main story / plot ) so don't truly hate him and for the sake of the story author made him seem as a bad person from the start so just to let you know .. .Not bad writing quality story development is in steady pace.character design is also okay .. I would not say it's fantastic / awesome but it's not bad . ( acceptable) world background is the same as we know with a little bit of twist .. it feels like mc didn't reincarnate in the mha world but different version of it with many different things from og Mha ( my hero academia )and obviously there's cultural stuff and mc has take responsibility for the family while his father is way.
Great story , the writing quality is good, the plot after some first chapter is logical with plausible and creative changes. As a fan of harem I rate the harem part 8/10. This is a slow pace story with an anti hero MC who good at using his brain, ruthless and very creative. You can think of him as a better version of Zeus that doesn't r@pe , has more brain cells and not as petty. The parts I dislike is how MC power was introduced in first chapters( it kinda too OP) and how the author too focus on Pedos crime
This is the third-best novel I have ever read. The first being MVS(of course). The second was one where the MC was reborn as a dungeon master and got a harem of legal lolis. A dragon girl a thousand years old and a vampire loli I don't remember her age though and a slime girl that wasn't legal so she wasn't a part of the harem.
It is good. I hate ff following the canon like a holy book and this is creative while keeping the good points of the series. ı would like better if there were more chapters but a chapter a day is good enough. Can't complain about that. Good job author. Keep it up
Autor-sama, no drop pls. Autor-sama, no drop pls. Autor-sama, no drop pls. Autor-sama, no drop pls. Autor-sama, no drop pls. Autor-sama, no drop pls. Autor-sama, no drop pls. Autor-sama, no drop pls. Autor-sama, no drop pls. Autor-sama, no drop pls.
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The story is pretty good.
Keeping the bloodline pure- Check Amazing Plot- Check Smart Mc- Check Although I would want more chappies, I know it is not easy to write them, sooooooo. I wish I could support the author but I am poor, sad face. Anyways, goood!
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