In Naruto With Gamer System

Had an interesting beginning with a good, slow but sure, system. The mc worked hard and everything seemed cool but the author decided to ruin it by having the mc befriend Naruto before telling him everything (parents, kurama, etc) and then there were no consequences for it despite the author repeatedly pointing out that it was a bad idea and that the anbu or root would come for him for doing that exact thing. Odd way to ruin a story but it is what it is I suppose. (also like all terrible naruto fics he instantly befriended Kurama with no trouble lol)

well it's a wish fulfilment fan-fic of the highest order in which tensions and stakes don't exist. It has a shop feature which takes out the struggle element as well. The tag says that the mc is smart which is technically true if everyone around you is make other characters deliberately not reach the MC's level. plot development is still in infancy as not a great many chapters have been released.

Great just great. If you ignore small mistakes in grammar, this fanfiction is the best. Totally recommend it. just read it..................

If a kid gets this OP without raising red flags everywhere in a Ninja village than that village has failed. He hasn’t even seen one class of school but is doing missions now. Clan leader will listen and support him unconditionally despite his age and it being impossible to know of some details he speaks about. Another fanfic where the authors giving the Mc full control without anyone being none the wiser.

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Truly disappointing... Has a good start but the author ruin it by making it a one man novel... What i mean is it always goes how the mc want no consequence for his action and all other people are just there for props. They dont have character, they're bland if you get what i mean..basically this novel is about a kid who has a system and playing survival with bots in naruto setting.

you know the story is bad since reading the first two chapters it made me feel nauseated , what kind of weed does the author smoke , the story is trassh ( I poisoned myself by reading the next 50 chapters🤮🖕)

im going to go ahead and give this a perfect rating. there might be a few mistakes here or there but easily overlooked. Its a positive, optimistic, wish fulfillment fanfic thats doing a great job at keeping the story interesting and upbeat. I personally dislike forced tragedy, emotionless drivel, and evil aligned MCs, its a cop out for easy writing by boring authors and this story isn't that. Keep it up!

this is a poorly made phantasy without in-depth knowledge about naruto story. so many mistakes in fact for example: 1). in ROOT the members dont have any tongue seal. 2). Danzo is incredibly nerfed with lower iq.(acceptable) 3). Itachi and shisui are made brain dead idiot through character int stats nerf. 4). World characters reaction doesn't seem realistic but dumb.( it feels like dead characters without any internal struggle but a "YES MAN" and from Xianxia/chinese faceslap writing style format. 5). The gamer system is only to fill plot hole is understandable but poorly implemented. 6).Most importantly it does not have the naruto worldly vibe. But more leaning towards Chinese Xianxia/wuxia family fighting for power vibe. 7). the gamer system and MC growth heavily dependant on plot hole. Wherever any inconsistency found readers can only attribute everything on the system. Highly non balance and non realistic. After all the cringe /unrealistic dialogue, it makes me wonder since this writing style absolutely cannot be from the naruto world then why not just blow everything out of proportion? my advice is if you really cannot write an immersive naruto self insert then DONT. It would be better to stick with the gamer system for the world background generated by gamer system. THIS WAY>>the author can make as many cringy/unrealistic diaglouge more adaptable for readers.

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A weird name is a turn off for me. I can't imagine people would put their own name in a fanfic. Tho, I do imagine it if I'm in Naruto's world but putting your own name is kinda cringey. Anyways, good luck with the fanfic.

I normally don't give a book 1 star easily, but this is really ridiculous. I read 9 chapters full of gaps in the story, I found it so ridiculous that I couldn't bear to read it. I don't want to disrespect the author, but what he wrote doesn't make any sense, I'm sorry.

more i like this a lot

Most illogical fic I have ever read in my life. How can you make it so bad? Makes no sense please stop