Entwined souls
This book is silver tier winner of webnovel contest WFP #21
Under "angels and demons series".
A demon met an angel in a club accidentally and saved her life. From then the angel sticks with him no matter what. She put every effort to make him fall for her. But did they fell in love coincidentally or is it the fate repeating itself again. Come and join the journey of Asbeel, the first fallen angel and now demon the prince of hell and his half-angel. And see how they fight with heaven to live their forbidden love.
Excerpt-
"Abigail" A gut wrenching cry shook heaven and earth.
An angel was flying towards heaven.
His blood shot eyes have so much grief that even angel bowed his head. But the creator was standing there unperturbed.
"Why Father, why did you kill Abigail." He asked with so much remorse that blood started seeping out of his eyes.
"You were a watcher, yet you led astray the whole Grigori of watchers by falling for the daughters of men. "
God asked back, the voice was calm and collected but the swirling storm behind him is a clear indication of his anger towards his own creation.
"But I love her father." He begged, pleaded for the life of his lover whose eyes has turned hollow. Those eyes who had kept him spellbound. More blood fell from his eyes.
"An angel can't love a human, it's forbidden and you know that." His father rebuked. He was annoyed at the folly of his child.
"But we all are your child father, if you want to punish, then punish me. Let her live." If one has to go, then let him be the one. He hugged the soulless body as if he wants to be one with her.
His father smirked, "you, my child, has got the worse retribution for your sin"
He looked at his father, uncertain what other things he had planned.
"She died an easy death, but you, you will live alone an immortal life feeling the pain to be the reason for your beloved dead." The creator explained his innocent child.
"Just because she is a human," he asked the obvious can't believe that God can be so cruel to his own creations.
"Then let him be the angel." He declared.
Growing his nails, he stabbed himself without an ounce of hesitation. His hand encompasses bright light energy and inflict it in his lover's body.
The soulless body took a deep breath and her cheeks turned rosy again, the lifeless eyes fluttered and he smiled.
He caressed her cheeks and took her fallen strand of hair in his hand, putting it back behind her ears.
He looked at the stunned face of his father and smiled. Just then he fell from heaven, losing all the energy his body had, and died.
But the good was beyond control. His creation has disgraced his gift. But he can't take the power the fallen angel has gifted to his beloved.
"Throw her back to earth before she wakes up. She would never be accepted as angel here." With that he vanished in the air.
After 100 centuries.
Well as the author said,it's a story a out one who was forsaken by God. But does God really forsake its child. It's a wonderful story of our beliefs on demon and angel. Not every demon is bad and not every angel is good. There are gray araes.
Up until chapter 33 it’s really a nice read, a few mistakes here and there but it gets better really fast. A novel featuring a naive angel in a modern harsh world meeting a demon clearly not so simple. A novel really worth giving it a try. 😊 Good luck Author and hope you will keep going. 🤗
nice language and interesting plot. good start as a new writer. looking forward to reading more about their love story. whether this pair bring peace or war in the realm.
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Totally enjoyed the story about the angel and the demon. Loving the interactions and the way the plot goes. Not a dull moment. A great read. Hope it gets the recognition it deserves. Great job author. 🥂
An angel and a demon . Such a different type of romance novel. And I like different. 😁😁. Adding to my library ASAP 😁 . Keep up the good work author. 👍
I got hooked from the first chapter, it's a good book to start reading novels. Angels and demon is a different topic plus it has some facts mixed with fiction
I started reading this book and I can say it looks good up until now. The first chapter was intresting and you want to know more, mainly because of the behaviour of the guy. Good job
Hi author! upon reviewing your book, I noticed many punctuations and grammatical errors, however, the story is going pretty well. But those errors are a hindrance to smooth flow of reading and uhhh yeah I hope I helped in some way and I'm also looking forward to your next chapters!
The story is very interesting and amazing from the beginning itself, as it keeps the person hooked. And i guess most of the person would definately love to complete it in one go like i did.
i love the theme of demon and angels. how they have love and hate relationship yet they survived together. i lile the male lead and looking forward to female lead.
Male lead is too cool while female lead is meek but I think she would grow sly with him. Love the way he tease her to the end. Looking forward to their romance and further struggle.
This book is good !! I hadn't thought that we could write something related to demons and angels !! Ahh !! it is cool... But, there are some errors... I hope you will try editing them... Other all, the story is good... Not too slow nor fast. It is medium paced I'm waiting for the romance to start in between these two !! That's all !! Good luck !!
from the first scene, you will think the male lead is a jerk, but he still saves the girl. his personality is just like a demon yet has kindness. while an angel who doesn't even know what she is.. looking forward to their journey.
this story is very interesting from starting, it keeps you hooked in the love and hate relationship and silly banter of ml and fl. plus its concepts and names can be found in reality.