Forsaken : The Angel wars

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Author: Marli_Hanekom
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Christine didn't know why her dreams were filled with angels.



Little did she know she was a reincarnation of the Angel of War.



Lucian who damned himself to follow his lover to earth was left broken to see her die over and over again.



Uriel who always hid his feelings in the shadows will not back down.



Who will win her love in the end?



This is a slow burn romance.



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Lucian took a step forward, Christine took a step back, her back hit the door. Lucian placed his hands on either side of her head pinning her in, his face came closer, she could feel his breath. "What does your gut tell you, Miss Parkins?"



Christine couldn't think, she was already undressing him. She averted her gaze, he removed this right hand, placing his fingers under her chin. He forced her face gently so that she was looking into his eyes.



"Do not look away from me, tell me what does your gut say?"



Christine gulped. "M... My gut says you are hiding behind a barrier, you are not dangerous to me."



Lucian smiled at her, he moved his face an inch closer, their noses almost touching. "I am a very dangerous man, Miss Parkins. Your gut is wrong."



Christine's head was spinning, then why did he ask me what my gut says if he will only brush it off? Before she could muster a retort her cooking alarm went off.



"That would be lunch."



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Warning: This story does contain smut, R-18. Please proceed with caution.



*Disclaimer: The cover does not belong to me and all credit goes to the artist.

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MichelleLeeee
MichelleLeeee

Oo OK. Very interesting read. I love the premise of this story. I am definitely rooting for ML in this one. FL is a good character and the use of reincarnated love comes into question. I wonder what the author will do next. Interested in smut, it’s here as well. Well done author!

4 years ago
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succulentgumbo
succulentgumbo

A unique take on a romance story involving otherworldly beings. There is a nice balance between the many different elements that the story has to offer, and in my opinion, the slow burn romance really helps bring such elements out. While many stories tend to look over its own potential in exchange for fanservice, this doesn't stray to that path, and continues to provide the story it was meant to tell.

4 years ago
3
Novia_Jackson
Novia_Jackson

I'm glad I started reading this novel, the characters are developing and the story is off to a great start. I wish I could get more bonuses daily.

4 years ago
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loveredroses
loveredroses

This is a very interesting story... I liked the story sooo much. Thank you author for such a beautiful story....... Keep up writing.............

4 years ago
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The_Procrastinator
The_Procrastinator

Reveal Spoiler

4 years ago
2
DaoistfTXtwf
DaoistfTXtwf

Liked the book so much I read it twice. [img=update]

2 years ago
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Jamie_Reason
Jamie_Reason

i so love this story!!!! one of the best and i so wish there were a number two!!!! i would read this over again and pay to read a number two for sure!!!!

2 years ago
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Karen_B_0308
Karen_B_0308

needs an editor badly. lots of spelling mistakes and use of the wrong word by definition. this is a great story that is very interesting but trying to figure out what the author is actually trying to say is very distracting to the reading.

2 years ago
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grace_hufancia
grace_hufancia

I have never written a review before. This book is special. There are typo errors, sometimes grammatical errors but you can still understand what the author is trying to say, you can still read it without having a headache (i do get headaches from reading some/other books with grammatical errors). So it’s good. I find the story unique and very interesting. So many twists and surprises! I love it! It can still improve, some editing will make it really good. Good luck dear author, thanks for this wonderful book. Write more!

2 years ago
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Gift_Rhoda
Gift_Rhoda

I'm glad to be part of this work thanks for this awesome book dear author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]I'm not good at words but if awesome is good then that is all I can say about this book

3 years ago
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revin_na
revin_na

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4 years ago
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CtrlAltKnight
CtrlAltKnight

Though not my cup of tea, I can see chances of turning this into from good to great. Kudos to the author. The author can still maximize the potential of this novel. Hmmn, Let's see what can I offer. The author can improve a little more on the emotional aspects or inner turmoil of the characters. Zeroing in those points will help them become more relatable. Adding a little more world-building will also help to capture the readers especially the beginning parts. You can make a diamond out of this. May the author write more, edit more, learn more, and earn more. Cheers!

4 years ago
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RazorIsSharp
RazorIsSharp

I like what I've read so far. I don't want to spoil anything, but I think fallen angels are the coolest and are fun to read about. I obviously want the two leads to be together, but more than that I want more time spent at each moment in the story - if that makes sense. The dialog really moves the story along from moment to moment, but I feel like some insight into the characters would really keep me reading also. After chapter 1, it would've been nice to hear more back story, but overall very enjoyable! I'm at chapter 11, but am going to keep reading this!

4 years ago
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SleepyKola
SleepyKola

intriguing!! Stories about angels always gets me, love it! The writing style is definitely a good one, the plots and development too! I love christine's character tbh😁 Good job author! Keep it up

4 years ago
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RJMidnight
RJMidnight

Romance is not my thing, but I always give honest reviews. Your story is interesting and you know how to hook a reader in with your first chapter. Your writing is really good, although you have tiny grammar mistakes that is not that noticeable and doesn’t mess with reading the story. For people who like romance stories, I would recommend this. Keep up the good work!

4 years ago
1