Naruto: The Great Swordsman

GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD. VERY VERY VERY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD.....,..................................... . it's really good story

I liked all you novels so far author-san. But I have to say that this one is my favorite as of now. You have truly improved in writing quality and story development, 👍 The reason I can recommend this novel to all Naruto and one-piece fans are two main reasons: 1. The ability he got from the system is limited (Mihawk abilities and lightning chakra) 2. He only had a system for two years( novice period for training). Once he completed the transfer of the two main powers the system Dissapered (bravo author 👍) Now I understand what was the problem with all the other system fanfics. As the story continues the system becomes the bottomless wish Fuflliment well. Then the story usually becomes bad.... But you author are really a genius. A trial period system. Such a simple solution to limit the MC and balance his abilities, truly an amazing accomplishment💪💪💪 Well done, hope you complete this novel as well since I think it has the greatest potential of all of your novels. 😎👍👍👍

Review after 36 chapters. This is very well hidden garbage. Mc is dense emo that likes to act cool and author is in love with his appearance. Absolutely nothing hapens in these 36 chapters. They go rescue Gaara but mc was on a date with Ino which he does not realize so he is a arrives just in time for the cannon group to arrive. He does nothing to hurry the rescue of Gaara because he hates that sand killed parents of his body. He never met them but still acts emo about them. He can not help og group because tobi fights him. As expected even with mcs super speed he lets tobi get away. Instead of neck he attacks arm like a moron and then his super sharp sword gets so dull and does not split tobi in half. Complete and uter waste of time.

Mc is dull and emo face i think Aokiji Yuki fanfic is much better than this... He does not like to communicate with anyone Unless he has to. That's why it's not at all like a story that the first person traveled to naruto world. if later get better i change my review.

why is there no chapter? was it deleted or will it not be on webnovel??????????????????????????????????????????.........................??????........???.??.?.?.?.??.???.?..?.?

until ch 7 the story development is truly impressive and consistent now it largely depends on how the author is trying to move the story forward. I think that the mc dream is well let's say pretty standard. Now the development largely depends on whether the author actively wants the Mc to include in the main plot. By the things now maybe the female lead is ino. And his intelligence lvl for now is decent the sword show-off thing may be because he is strong now. But if he truly wants to be hidden that's a no-no. And I think that he is gonna be actively included in the plot and people gonna be in awe by his strength that type. And the author has some decent experience and know-how to deliver his ideas so very much looking forward to the future developments. All the best for this book.

Not too sure what's going on here... MC is pretty much a dense guy who totally doesn't even matchup to the original Mihawk at all. This author though did write one of my favorite storys though, so please don't judge them by this work. Recommend the other story Aokoji as it's a much better read.

This fanfic is a amazin and incredible wet dream for any emo teenagers. In here you can find a Gary stu edgy mc that act like a sociopath and at best like a autistic who simple ignore everyone and act like he in his own world. We can't forget how everyone simple ignore he suddenly received a extremely good and expensive so word out of nowhere and simple accept

I like the story, but it is true that I would have liked more that he had been acquiring strength little by little, not that in the first chapter he became the most powerful on the planet.

By far my favorite works from this author yet. The best part is that the characters actually act like how they were originally portrayed and not like some Chinese cultivators. 11/10

For now it is great story but i hope the author will not focus the story on romance and harem because it might ruin the story. It is better if the story more focus on the mc itself rather than romance and harem.

take my preemptive 5 stars as a show of confidence in your ability to write 5 star worthy fanfics. the previous 2 OP to Naruto fanfics where and are going fantastic so far. and I hope you update saturo gojo:Naruto in your free time.

it's just boring. I was expecting he'll get to Mihawk's level slowly but we got a stronger Mihawk instead. Wth would people from Narutoverse do with that? He's just too OP that any villain won't matter anymore.

i like the aokiji story better.compared to that this meh.but still it's good .......,...................................................mmmmmmmmmmm