Bombyx: Return of the Vengeful Eldest Daughter

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Author: dancematdan
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Ki Bombyx comes from a merchant family that has a long history.

Unfortunately she was fated to walk on the line between life and death after the slaughter of her family.

Incident after incident.

Misfortune after misfortune.

Loss after loss.

She finally climbed up to a position where she could get her vengeance after living a long life of struggle, achieving her life’s goal she no longer has the energy to live on so she prepares to face her death that will be coming soon.



So many wanted her dead but the mystery always was… where did she come from and who was she?

As the curtain calls she finally performs one final act of vengeance and puts the surrounding powers in chaos which could not be easily repaired for many years.



But.. is it truly the end?







This is an original story written by myself, not a translation and will have many errors since it is unedited and not proofread yet.

please be patient with my mistakes and enjoy.





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Novels under my account

Bodyguard of a Villainess in an Apocalyptic Revenge Novel

Tiny Terror of the Aether Era

Kan-Gar-Chu! (One Piece Fanfic)

Pi-Gar-Chu! (One Piece Fanfic)

Bombyx: Return of the Vengeful Eldest Daughter (Ongoing)

Dr who is where now? (Dragon Ball Fanfic)

Apotropaic of Danmachi

Holy Beast Saintess (Dropped)

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dancematdan
dancematdan

Shameless self review.. but here is just the authors words to those reading as I am asking for your patience and understanding. As you may or not be aware, this was my main project but after taking a break, it has been put on a period of inactivity as I have been focussed on other projects that I have ongoing at present. During the writing process, the first draft will be uploaded in an unedited state in order to save time to write my other chapters for other books. The quality may be slightly lower and there may be the occasional mistake so I ask those that are more critical of mistakes and grammar to please be patient and give it a chance before judging so soon. If you have read any of my other novels then you should be already aware of my writing style and quirks as I tend to go into detail and hyper focus on certain points too much so I will apologise for that in advance? I am hoping to start up this original novel again very soon and will release one to two chapters a week which will be built upon depending on how I can arrange my time. The one piece fanfic has eight releases of chapters per week, another OP fanfic has three to four releases a week and then another project has two a week with this one included so I do not have time for proofreading and editing my works before uploading them. If I do so then the releases will become much less as most of my time will be spent on correcting mistakes, it is a question of what the audience would prefer in the end.. would they prefer high quality with one or two chapters that are released late or not at all each week.. or would you prefer a regular upload schedule to be kept while ocasionally spotting a minor error?

2 years ago
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dancematdan
dancematdan

Shameless self revIew, how would i truly rate this book? I have no idea as I most definately not an expert enough to judge others or my own works. This is a smaller project than my previous book ‘Holy Beast Saintess’ I will try my best to keep this project going but I cannot make promises I am not sure I can 100% keep. Upload schedule is estimated to be 1-5 page uploads a week with 900+ words, I will do my best to update this but if I lose motivation or inspiration later I may take a break.

3 years ago
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TATTERWING
TATTERWING

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3 years ago
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Rakshahsa
Rakshahsa

a year ago
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Dao_of_Bibliomania
Dao_of_Bibliomania

The writing quality is great and perfectly understandable with a lack of noticeable errors. The stability of the updates is great and comes out quickly for the most part. The story development is well thought out and has things that has foreshadowed from many many chapters ago. The characters are well thought out and are given a deep look into them. While the world background is great and planned out well. Overall, one of the best cultivation novels I have read. P.S. Please give some suggestions for good cultivation novels like these because I cannot seem to find any

a year ago
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dancematdan
dancematdan

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2 years ago
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ElRando
ElRando

Pretty interesting though I really don’t like how the author uses apostrophes and plurals and basically swaps between them freely without mind for correctness and also in the later stages the grammar drops a grade makes it kinda seem like a translation the author wants to take credit for but for now author your novel which is yours is definetly good 👍

2 years ago
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dancematdan
dancematdan

Leaving another shameless author review. Slowing down the two pages a day for a while and trying to get one out per day or at least five per week if I am lacking in inspiration. New cover design that I made myself in my free time so I hope that it tries to show off the main character a little.

2 years ago
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