Monkey in the Multiverse

the no harem tag just put a smile on my face

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O, OoooO, Stinky, poop, ahahahaha poppy!

Very bad. Can't understand what's going on most of the time. 😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😟😐😐😟😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😐

Maybe, it is time for me to return to monke, or maybe I have lost myself deep within a rabbit hole, slowly descending deeper and deeper into my own subconscious thoughts to the point where I can no longer think. Anyway, good fic.

writing is good and easy to understand so 5✳️ story development and character development was good I have read 134 chapters... it becomes bland near the mha end arc...and it's not because mc had become op....it's because the interaction between character is becoming plain....for ex - around chapter 100 or something interaction with zeowtwo is mainly (darling , yes angle, you look beautiful or I love you ECT let's go to the bed) mostly end there. same with interaction with side character saw a kid with sad orphan type story , adopt him or her.... after that he will cook food or buy clothes and gift some power ,give some potion slap a experience card and tada the kid naw see them as their parents.... their is no depth or heart to heart talk or any quality conversation or emotions between mc and kid....and not even a simple conversation between zero two and the kids..... the importance or impression of zero two has changed from mfc to some side character that is mentioned time to time in novel.....her character is becoming bland and her presence is fading....if was an oc instead of a popular wifu I might have actually started ignoring her in story same with the other side character.... excluding MC's daughter (ilezabeth) a little ....for ex intraction with all might I was a good start but ended up in few paragraph in last chapter of the arc..(like he used magic to this and that and all might Healed and become friends and over.....) in all out round up...their wasn't and intraction worth mentioning with the world mha itself...like their wasn't much between the people of the and aside from may 3-5 character... even that was minimum Even that was just casual conversation even few events that happened became plain because he just manipulated everyone memories to make that changes seem natural so he won't have to deal with anything....or explain anything ect author mc would become isolated like this with no public or society intraction which will make repeated and boring last what I can think is mc unstable personalty at times.... with no development.. some time he is adopting kid another second he becomes killing machine jus because let see someone bump into him or insulted his family oso kill everyone in sight, even if the character killed has potential to be Ally so their not much development in his personality...as he is isolated from other and prefer manipulating their memories instead of having any conversation with them...it will disturb his nap....so their is no moral line for him excluding family and friends ,he transfer artificial memories on others so they in a way do his bidding even if he knew that character wasn't that bad ex------- flair..... their was no harm done still he kills her..,so him using magic to be alone instead of well kinda like forming friendship or something like that even though he knew about her doesn't help and hamper his character growth, I don't mind killing... but using memory manipulation so he won't have to explain to his friends or those around him doesn't leave much material for his growth or any side or support character growth....so 3✳️ for both character and story development update stability good so 4✳️ and well world background we all know but without solid character or story base....the novel has kinda become like overall summary of the novel I will still continue to read hope it gets better again THANKS FOR THE NOVEL AUTHOR IT IS GREAT READ HOPE MY REVIEW MAY HELP EVEN IF LITTLE , IF I OFFENDED YOU IN ANY WAY I AM SOORY (you don't really have to decrease his strength to develop character you can do it by intracting with surrounding... you can take reference from a fic based on devil is part timer ... quiet a good fic op mc good development THANKS AGAIN HOPE IT MAY HELP EVERYONE

Translation Quality 5/5 Very readable, grammar is on point as well. Stability of Updates 5/5 Uploads several times a day, what else can I say? Story Development 4/5 Pacing is good. I dont really have any complaints besides that fact that I dont really agree with some actions the MC takes. Of course, it's just my preference. Character Design 4/5 Again, I dont agree with some things the MC does, but it's my preference. But the MC is pretty easy to read. Slightly insane, a yandere and a bit of a masochist (only then 02 is involved lol). World Background 3/5 It's decent, but the author doesnt really explain things well. You can only REALLY picture what's going on during the important events if you've seen the anime or something. All in all, a good read. Give it a shot. Please note Ive ONLY READ UP TO CHAPTER 38! Which is where the first Franxx arc ends. PS: There's a lot of lovey dovey stuff in here with some lewd shit sprinkled all over (like handholding and hugs) so yeah...

꠸ ꪖꪑ ꪻꫝꫀ ꫀ᥊ρ ꪮᠻ ꪑꪗ ᠻ꠸ꪀᧁꫀ᥅. ᭙ꫀ᥇ꪀꪮꪜꫀꪶ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪮᦔꪗ, ꪖꪀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪶꪮꪮᦔ. ꠸ ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀᦔ ꪮꪜꫀ᥅ ꪖ ꪻꫝꪮꪊᦓꪖꪀᦔ ꪊᦓꫀꪶꫀᦓᦓ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᭙꠸ꪻꫝᦓꪻꪮꪮᦔ ρꪖ꠸ꪀ ꪻꪮ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀ ꪑꪖꪀꪗ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꪗꫀꪻ, ꪻꫝꪮᦓꫀ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ ᭙꠸ꪶꪶ ꪀꫀꪜꫀ᥅ ꫝꪮꪶᦔ ꪖꪀꪗꪻꫝ꠸ꪀᧁ. ᦓꪮ, ꪖᦓ ꠸ ρ᥅ꪖꪗ...... ꪊꪀꪶ꠸ꪑ꠸ꪻꫀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ᭙ꪮ᥅ᛕᦓ!!!

Skyrim opens with an Imperial wagon driving four prisoners down a snowy mountain pass. All are seated and bound; the one dressed in finery is gagged.] Ralof: Hey, you. You’re finally awake. You were trying to cross the border, right? Walked right into that Imperial ambush, same as us, and that thief over there. Lokir: D**n you Stormcloaks. Skyrim was fine until you came along. Empire was nice and lazy. If they hadn’t been looking for you, I could’ve stolen that horse and been half way to Hammerfell. You there. You and me — we should be here. It’s these Stormcloaks the Empire wants. Ralof: We’re all brothers and sisters in binds now, thief. Imperial Soldier: Shut up back there! [Lokir looks at the gagged man.] Lokir: And what’s wrong with him? Ralof: Watch your tongue! You’re speaking to Ulfric Stormcloak, the true High King. Lokir: Ulfric? The Jarl of Windhelm? You’re the leader of the rebellion. But if they captured you… Oh gods, where are they taking us? Ralof: I don’t know where we’re going, but Sovngarde awaits. Lokir: No, this can’t be happening. This isn’t happening. Ralof: Hey, what village are you from, horse thief? Lokir: Why do you care? Ralof: A Nord’s last thoughts should be of home. Lokir: Rorikstead. I’m…I’m from Rorikstead. [They approach the village of Helgen. A soldier calls out to the lead wagon.] Imperial Soldier: General Tullius, sir! The headsman is waiting! General Tullius: Good. Let’s get this over with. Lokir: Shor, Mara, Dibella, Kynareth, Akatosh. Divines, please help me. Ralof: Look at him, General Tullius the Military Governor. And it looks like the Thalmor are with him. D**n elves. I bet they had something to do with this. This is Helgen. I used to be sweet on a girl from here. Wonder if Vilod is still making that mead with juniper berries mixed in. Funny…when I was a boy, Imperial walls and towers used to make me feel so safe. [A man and son watch the prisoners pull into town.] Haming: Who are they, daddy? Where are they going? Torolf: You need to go inside, little cub. Haming: Why? I want to watch the soldiers. Torolf: Inside the house. Now.

[THIS REVIEW IS MY OPINION] So I have just binge read this all the way up to latest chapter (146) and I got to say that that the story is good and will keep you entertained. However, there is one major part about this fanfiction that puts me off a little bit. After the MC left Fairy Tail to go to the next world he pretty much became something like a god and started giving everyone abilities and powers they should not have, yes this is a fanfiction but i personally like it when the characters from those worlds stay the same. An there is the part where the MC kills anyone he doesn't like which is also puts me off a little but not as much as the other point. I do recommend that you read this fanfiction!

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I'll give my own review since I've read the whole novel. 1: Advantage: Quiet slice of life, love between the MC and his wife (no harem), traveling between different worlds (Darlingin the franxx, One Piece, Fairy Tail, Naruto, MHA, Bleach, Danmachi, Demon Slayer, The Rising of the Shield Hero , Shokugeki no Soma ), making friends everywhere and adopting unhappy children and everything... 2: BIG DISADVANTAGE: The MC is literally MA#SO#CH#IST with a BIG M + BETA + SIMP for his wife who does what she wants with him (yes, I know you're going to say it's love and everything, but there's a limit to do not go over, in short everyone has their own tastes, but I prefer a peaceful relationship of love and wisdom, and I'm not saying that you have to be a CHAD to please me since it's my personal opinion) The author understands absolutely nothing about power, let me explain: When the MC just traveled to Fairy Tail for the first time after he was tied with ROGER from ONE PIECE, he can't beat ERZA at the beginning of the story since the author says ERZA since ERZA is stronger than WHITE BEARD!!! and any sh#it soup can beat him at first since even Jose nearly killed him not to mention the others. After he returns to Fairy Tail the second time, he becomes OP (I like MC OP, but with a better explanation and power Ups) His son after going Demon Slayer and training there and coming back to BLEACH and becomes powerful since he unlocked his BANKAI and after being trained by Ichibē Hyōsube and Ôetsu Nimaiya, he ends up killing Jugram Haschwalth the right arm of Yhwach and that he is tied with Kenpachi Zaraki last form (final BLEACH), so we can expect him to be super strong and all but no, the author nerfs him so much that he is crushed by a Vice Admiral from ONE PIECE after he used his BANKAI and the only explanation is that he doesn't master HAKI?? a BIG BS, after any Vice Admiral or Admiral crushes it and that's normal since the author says he can't use HAKI, but DA#MN he's tied with Kenpachi and can literally destroy ONE PIECE if we follow the logic of the author, but no, apparently the people of ONE PIECE are stronger than BLEACH which is a BIG BS since the same author says that WHITE BEARD from ONE PIECE cannot beat ERZA at the beginning of the story of FAIRY TAIL, which means that if you want to continue reading this novel, you have to unplug your brain cells, that's a free advice from me. (and yes you are going to tell me why his father did not teach him HAKI, quick answer by what he says that you have to manage on your own and not rely on him all the time, but DA#MN teach him HAKI with not even 1 second with your shi#tty system and let it manage after. And i don't need to talk about his daughter to whom he gave him great power but after sending him to ONE PIECE he sealed his power but at least he left her the HAKI and a DEVIL FRUIT, so she can manage in this world. Well after he became OP, there was no more training or POWER UP since the worlds are weak and all, but DA#MN you sent him to 10 worlds, so why not send him to DRAGON BALL or Cultivation worlds to find people of his caliber or stronger than him. Oh well, the last thing to know is that the MC is weaker than his wife and I'm not talking about his MA#SO#CHIST side but statistics since the system gives his wife the same POWER UP as the MC and in addition to Triple or more BONUS, which makes his wife stronger than him, which i think he should have ( Author ) made his wife the protagonist of the novel and presto, finally we have a reliable protagonist to follow. PS: I know that my criticism is long and all, that's why i mentioned the advantages at the beginning and of course it's my personal opinion, so everyone has their own tastes, but It seems that the MC is actually ZeroTwo, and the Novel is written in Hiro's POV.

The concept is good and I love the story but a problem I have is I still don't know what is going on most of the time a now I am waiting for him to go to another world with zero two it would be really cute

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