The immortal tales

loved reading the book good writing wish it was a bit more proper this site lacks real english writing hope you improve down the line so i have fun

What a great start..surely the author is very talented...The characters are strong, the plot is good, the world around is fantastic surely this is a treat to read

The plot is good. But some work needs to be done with the grammar ...(maybe the author can use Grammarly). But as I kept reading, the concept was actually good. It got better as it went on. I could empathize with the loneliness of the male lead. Immortality is not a boon but rather a curse...

Keep working hard and progressing. Never stop telling the story its just got to be your best everyday. hope to see you other works as well.

good control of actual literature could easily recommend this book for reading if you enjoy a mixed story experience with proper writing standards

The story is wonderful. The way the story flow is nice. I didn't see any grammatical errors there. I don't feel like giving a spoiler, it will be better if you read it. Great work, Author. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

This is a really good book! Even though the immortal trope has seldom been used, it is very difficult to write. I applaud the author for doing such a great job on this novel! I suggest everyone to check out this book

Great and epic premise. I love how exact and precise the worldbuilding is and I was unable to find any sore or serious consistency errors. The style is epic action/adventure, and the stakes in the story seem high.

The book needs a little work. A little more fine tuning. It is the author's first work so at least it needs to be applauded. Interesting plot idea, the combination of mythology was just beautiful to read. The emotions of the mc was shown through. Keep it up.