As a system was granted to Deva she soon embarked on her own adventure; from exploring different worlds; from exploiting both the weak and strong to quell her lust and create any kind of scenario to entertain herself.
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4 years ago
15
Prathamesh_Sarje
Really liking this novel. I always wanted to read yandere gl novel and this is really a interesting one. So far love the mc personality and all the female leads. The world building is also good.
4 years ago
6
Miyoko
5/5 i like all character designs, they arent to annoying but not too dead they keep to there characters. World background: who cares since theres so much worlds but decent background in each one of them. Story development 5/5 i like the story but that might just be my taste. Stability of updates is also 4/5-5/5 depends but 1-3? In a week. Writing quality is also 5/5 love how mc is masochist and everyone is a sadist/yandere and how the mc has the actor skill makes it 100% better cause in stories not everyone has the same taste ok?
3 years ago
5
Milandaanza
So without spoiling too much.
-If you are here for the gamelit; The focus on a system, power growth, achievements, etc. This isnt for you. The system ends up pointless pretty fast as the MC is generally outside of the system. Just full stop.
-If you don’t like evil mc’s with dark aspecTs and/or have issues with triggers related to dark happenings then don’t pick this up. It pretty much ticks all the boxs and more but lets just straight up emphasize sexual assault, torture, slavery and many others.
-If you dont like Yanderes and S/M extreme play, put this down and walk away. Seriously.
Beyond all that? It seems well written with a coherent plot. My only major complaints are a lack of trigger warnings and the irrelivance of her system. The MC is properly evil; not just edgy nonsense and the storyline is pretty intriguing. That is all.
amazing just hope you update more.
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3 years ago
1
Killen
no, exactly what I expect but this is good as well very nice this novel is even though the writing quality can be improved a lot but I can see that I will like this
Overall a good novel till our mc turned into a weird masochist and doesn’t take full advantage of her system to grow at a crazy rate as from what I read she could summon new sisters every so often but got dominated by her early summons then stopped using the system to summon more
The author does not know what dots and commas are? Sometimes whole paragraphs go in one sentence. There are often not enough spaces. The transition from the 3rd person to the 1st is not divided. Imho, but if the author were not too lazy to make a normal edit, there would be 2 times more readers
3 years ago
0
VirginOlives
Really good novel glad I found it while trying to look for new yandere novels to read.
The MC is quite unique I guess as I'm not used to an openly masochistic protagonist.
3 years ago
0
_Shiromi_
I come here to search copper but found gold btw nice fanfic also interesting to be honest keep a good work and take care yourself[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Really liking this novel. I always wanted to read yandere gl novel and this is really a interesting one. So far love the mc personality and all the female leads. The world building is also good.
5/5 i like all character designs, they arent to annoying but not too dead they keep to there characters. World background: who cares since theres so much worlds but decent background in each one of them. Story development 5/5 i like the story but that might just be my taste. Stability of updates is also 4/5-5/5 depends but 1-3? In a week. Writing quality is also 5/5 love how mc is masochist and everyone is a sadist/yandere and how the mc has the actor skill makes it 100% better cause in stories not everyone has the same taste ok?
So without spoiling too much. -If you are here for the gamelit; The focus on a system, power growth, achievements, etc. This isnt for you. The system ends up pointless pretty fast as the MC is generally outside of the system. Just full stop. -If you don’t like evil mc’s with dark aspecTs and/or have issues with triggers related to dark happenings then don’t pick this up. It pretty much ticks all the boxs and more but lets just straight up emphasize sexual assault, torture, slavery and many others. -If you dont like Yanderes and S/M extreme play, put this down and walk away. Seriously. Beyond all that? It seems well written with a coherent plot. My only major complaints are a lack of trigger warnings and the irrelivance of her system. The MC is properly evil; not just edgy nonsense and the storyline is pretty intriguing. That is all.
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amazing just hope you update more. .........................................................................................................................................................
no, exactly what I expect but this is good as well very nice this novel is even though the writing quality can be improved a lot but I can see that I will like this
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Overall a good novel till our mc turned into a weird masochist and doesn’t take full advantage of her system to grow at a crazy rate as from what I read she could summon new sisters every so often but got dominated by her early summons then stopped using the system to summon more
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The author does not know what dots and commas are? Sometimes whole paragraphs go in one sentence. There are often not enough spaces. The transition from the 3rd person to the 1st is not divided. Imho, but if the author were not too lazy to make a normal edit, there would be 2 times more readers
Really good novel glad I found it while trying to look for new yandere novels to read. The MC is quite unique I guess as I'm not used to an openly masochistic protagonist.
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