The Holy Chronicles of Baator

It's basically "Warlock in the Magus World", but in Dxd. So, there's an emphasis on cultivation. It's too early in to write a more complex review, but it's pretty good so far.

Honestly a good fiction. A different point of view and much earlier than the canon, combined with an unexpected protagonist, give life to a pleasant and innovative story. A new way to exploit the immense probabilities of the DXD universe, without the characters people are used to, with an ambitious, intelligent and hard-working mc. Congratulations author.

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Honestly author has a great and novel idea to use Zeoticus as the target for transmigration but the problem is so far the novel has been leaning heavily to Kingdom Building rather than gathering a harem of “hot milfs” and “Romance” Or any “self insert” whatever that means as suggested in the synopsis. You would expect our MC to see romantic development before side characters do but nope out of the blue a side char nabs a wife/mate before our MC has even gone to 2nd base. Some have complained that woman should be reserved for MC but that isnt the issue...the issue is they got developments before our MC did and it is frustrating to read about. It would have been a better choice to give the MC progress with atleast his first harem member or a second one before bothering to show anything about a side characters’ romance... If author wanted to write a story with multiple main characters, great but dont label it as “self insert” “harem” “romance” when these things dont happen to the MC in order of priority. Finally there is a strange obsession with cultivation themes even though such things were barely mentioned in DxD canon. Tbh its a very unique approach but author is in denial that he reads cultivation novels...like what? Then why that focus? Its alright for killing time I guess

The writing has been of high quality. So far, nothing to complain about, but the updates aren't as frequent as they should be. I suppose they still have lives in real life, so I can see that the tale progression isn't horrible; it's neither too quick nor too sluggish. You might argue that the character design is awful, but I think it's good, and the people in the story have personalities that I appreciate. The author presents numerous diverse pantheon and supernatural entities, and it places a strong emphasis on building the global backdrop. It's probably one of the greatest reads you can get on webnovel, and I encourage reading it, following it, and supporting the author since he puts his heart and soul into producing this fantastic fiction. I hope to see more chapters that I can read.

Well... I'm bored so let's do a review of this novel according to my opinion. First, the development of the mc background and the world is pretty good with the interactions between characters that are not too rigid, which makes my opinion go up a bit with this fanfic. Second, in world background building adding boost in Things like Cultivation in the Magic World wasn't very good because Magic actually had more potential than Cultivation. Although Cultivation Novels were the first path I stepped on in the world of novels, I have to agree with some of the opinion of the reviewers in this fanfic that taking the path of cultivation after magic is not the right step. As for Magic has a greater potential in the story compared to cultivation, because cultivation itself is a lazy writer's step in making steps to form the power of the mc itself, because in many cultivation novels that I read, cultivation is like a ladder through which we can walk. step our feet from the bottom to the top of the stairs just by following the path of the stairs, while magic has a lot of potential for story development than cultivation which in my opinion is very monotonous where we only need time, luck, and sit in a place where a lot of energy is collected and cultivated. whereas magic couldn't do that because magic users couldn't just sit there waiting to break through that limit, magic required a huge amount of theory and complexity to take power to the next level. that's all my opinion about this novel after reading 100+ chapters, this novel is not good but also not bad, just average for someone like me who likes mc which requires complicated mind and theory to grow his strength. maybe a little suggestion for writers about novels where mc which I think is good to be an example like [DxD : Annihalation Maker, Holy Right : Ocultist in Multiverse, and E. P. I. C] that all three are very good at developing strength and personality in mc.

There are a lot of low reviews just because of how they hate the Chinese thingy that has been added here. I too hate it, but you have to appreciate the fact that the author added some things right? I don't know... we all have diff. opinions so yeah... good story but it might be better if author goes with 3rd POV imo.

Up to chapter 91, it's a pretty good read. the Chinese style of power levels can be quite annoying but still enjoyable if you like dxd. The biggest drawback is the introduction of other transmigrator in chapter 91. Apparently the comments section said this was hinted at way before, but I guess I never got that hint. Simply this is a tag that if I had known I wouldn't have read the story at all so I'm just letting others know since I didn't see it mentioned.

I like your WB and WD, dxd has some amazing WB that wasnt developed and seeing as it a focus of your shit is nice. I like the new addition of factions and elements, hope more is there and explored upon. The runic shit was cool, would be cool if you show its workings, and how MC uses his meta knowledge to shit rather than just stating he did this and made that. Idk, try to explore/explain more upon on it. ex: Using magic in a nuclear fission/fusion type manner to make energy reactor . Using magic to reinforce cell by cell to get stronger body rather than just covering body with magic.[ these just ex: something better than this ]. Also, I am on the fence of your wuxia shit, cultivation type power system whilst messed up is actually much better at strength lvl as opposed to other fictional counterparts [ in theory ] but I dont care as long as neither MC or others have that wuxia mentality [ or at the very least MC ]. But I suggest you do explain your power lvl. the review by DolanTramp is valid imo. Seeing as you made your own shit, also explore and explain it. ordinary goblins are dirt shit, but urs are different, more stronger. Also neuter the magic of the devils, its OP but was ignored in the OG. Try create restrictions and limits or something [ not the MC, but the magic ] Any relationships build, dont rush, dont make MC or lovers sluts. no massive harem. its ruins bks. Also cool who the MC SI as and the timeline too. GL

alright, first off the amount of plot holes is just astounding the author said that this is a heavy AU but that still doesn't excuse the number of plot holes created by his deviation from the source material, second, i ran into some grammatical errors but they weren't so many as to be a reason to cross out this fic completely the writing is not unreadable so to say it's just that there are some parts that might need some polishing, however, my real problem with the writing and character design is how the author portrayed the character's conversations, for the most part they just sound robotic with no real "life" if that makes sense and half the stuff they say is either chunni or is something you'd expect a xianxia Chinese character to say

No offense, but this "war" is really starting to get long in the tooth. I mean, you're not even to the real "great war" yet, just this side thing that's chewing up tons of chapters with no end in sight to it. He's just getting generic "resources" at the moment... which ultimately means nothing. Just hoping this Planar war really ends soon.

Has a lot of potential, but between the instability of updates and the glacial pace of character development, I doubt we will see anything interesting at all in the "Journal type chapters" until chapter 150 or so. The character is supposed to be a self insert from some kind of warhammer 40k world mixed with stellaris or something like that? He'll probably be responsible for bringing the chaos gods in chapter 400 or so after Yahweh's death.

"Writing Quality: The writing is decent but it has a certain inconsistency, somewhat reminiscent of Chinese novels, which might come across as peculiar. Stability of Updates: Updates are quite slow. Story Development: The plot seems to be overloaded with numerous events, leading to noticeable plot holes. Character Design: The main character's actions feel illogical for an 'antihero,' as he resorts to killing billions for a seemingly insignificant reward like an alchemy book. It creates an unintentional humorous element in the story. World Background: The setting appears to lack a clear identity, oscillating between cultivation, DXD, and even science fiction elements. Overall, the main character's actions make it challenging to appreciate the story. Despite its high rating, I find the writing and side character development to be rather mediocre."