Ancient Supreme Overlord
Ban was heading home after tiring day from school when he was hit by truck-kun while saving a kid.
He was hit so hard that he flew a few meters away. At midair, he thought to himself.
"So this is my little life will end"
"Wait wait wait! I know this scene!"
"I've read plenty of novels like this. All of 'em reincarnated or transmitigated to other world and gain some powerful abilities like sh*t"
"Goodbye! cruel world! Hello New world!"
"Im gonna be like some bad*ss boss in there! yeah!"
Ban muttered in his head in 1 second after adrenaline struck his head.
He fantasized being reborn in a new world while imagining wild things.
He was hoping, expecting, desiring in his mind before he closed his eyes.
....
A day later..
In a hospital near the accident area.
"The patient have 99 bones fractured, several light and serious injuries and blood loss but he was still alive. I don't know if this is a miracle or a tragedy. Poor kid."
The Head Surgeon read the report while shaking his head.
...
"Oh the Light! I see the light!" Ban opened his eyes a little saw a light.
However, after a few seconds he realized something.
Ban then sighed depressedly "Dang those novels! A freaking scam!"
A/N: Heads up! This is a fantasy novel. Has Powers and sh*t
- Cover is not mine.
- English is not my 1st language. Please bear with my grammar. Thanks!
Cheers!
The syntax and formatting are almost as bad as MTL. I can't read it. Takes me right out of the story. Another thing I noticed is that instead of role-playing each character the writer makes it incredibly cliche. Young master cliche. It's just not very good. Keep at it, man. Get a development editor and some proofreaders. Use Google Docs and Grammarly.
The writing is of good quality and easily understood and smoothly read. The updates are consistent so far, the story is nice and developing well. The characters are nice and I like the MC as he deals with problems immediately doesn't let it fester. The world building is also integrated in the story well. Read the tags, if you like it them then you will like the story. PS: You do not get the same repetitive heroic MC, he is not dense or stupid so read it you will like it. PS: Review at chapter 50
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bro you got errors in your synopsis... fix that before you continue making a story....................................................mmmmmmmm
loving it 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍. hope the author continues to write to the end😤😤😤......................,..............................
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I like evrything in this book its just alot of flirting like alot otherwise its great give it a try .......................................
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hello author, when I read your novel at first I was boring and the story was a bit cliche with the case of the young Chinese master,.. but I read on and on actually this story is quite interesting, and if possible I hope the author can update the next chapters quickly, so that the readers you can be more flexible in reading your work... oh yes and if you can, you can show more scenes of 18+, so that readers can be even more energetic, greetings reading, yes, everyone does think this is trivial, but it has its own charm for me authors,.... and I also hope that this will have a netoric scene that the MC will seize the woman who saves time in the hospital, and I really hope that author... I have imagined that a woman named Emma is very beautiful and sexy, and I hope she can be a companion mc hahahaha...
author I know you started uploading new chapter but please make it fast. i request you as a honest reader
hey author buddy when will you start uploading new chapter. we are waiting for new chapter