The Watcher of the Dimensions

Sure, the grammar is not the best. But it is not like he is making money and let's be honest. This is webnovel. Anyone really complaining are just annoying. Good story and you get into my library as a good book.

Story is a bit fast paced, which sometime make the story feel forced.Every now and then, some sentences missing some word or even worse, the sentence does not make any sense. I think this is due to the author is very immersed in writings the story that some of the plot that the author want to conveys stay in his/her mind and thinking he/she already wrote its. Romance felt unnatural, not sure why tho. Overalls, it is enjoyable if you have nothings to read otherwise wait until the author finished the story and so that reader can enjoy reading it. Suggestions that I want to make is to proof read it after finish writing a chapter.

ok but what is this story about?

cant write a good review all i can say is that it is a good one i recommend to read it. 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋 😋

first off the grammar and spelling are both atrocious making it hard to read at all, second what ive read had very little in terms of punctuation. unless the author improves their english skills and rewrites i dont reccommend this

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I just can't stand the grammar, so I failed to give a good review. The story has no respect to include prepositions, and occasionally misses pronouns. I'm not sure, but that's enough to let me leave from chapter one. someone tell me when the grammar is fixed entirely. Don't trust my other evaluations except the writing quality... from a person on chapter 1

Ngl grammar is abysmal but I can understand the concept thinking of rewriting this in better English lol

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I like the concept of the fic the only thing I don't like is what the MC does in each universe that goes

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A great and interesting fic, great job author san 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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As such Fanfic is not known. Author your story is very good, you have everything to rise in the ranking, keep up the great work and all the best.