Afterlife Travel

Like the story a lot, i just don’t like the POV change at all. Stick with Crynn and forget about the other guy.

The MC is dumb... Anyone who read the books or watched movies can understand how tough the magical world is and he goes into things like he's James bond 🤣 and then blunders and relaxes and does more dumber things..sleeping on the Hogwarts train?! Lol

The story is decent but the pov change threw me off. The grammar is good, the story is nice, the character is semi-interesting, but again I'm not a fan of the random pov change and the almost a 100 chapters later your back to where you started just to change back. No warning just right their.

Author writing quality is excellent. So, it really was surprised to me when I found how annoyingly stupid the story was constructed. Even after mc stupid decisions, the story was funny in it's first ark( Harry Potter). The second (The mummy) has 5-6 chapter regarding hyena meat. I know it's to flesh out mcs of the movie and it works too, but I can't help but feel frustrated reading those chapters. And we have third ark(resident evil 3) were we have a completely different mc. At this point, I don't even know what was author thinking to tell the story of a completely different person midway of the story. That's the point I stopped reading(ch.78) as all the subsequent chapters are in cailian pov. So, most likely mc of this story didn't appears in this ark. It's sad that although the author writing is good, but changing mc midway isn't wise choice in any story.

I like the story. I want to keep reading, but the change in pov is just throwing me off. It's a good book, I just wish the author would stick with a single character. Skipped right over like a whole volume after reading the first chapter of the pov switch. I thought, alright just skip the volumes that aren't the main character. Then got to the newest volume and it keeps bouncing back and forth between characters.

Shameless review by shameless author : If you'd like a fanfiction with the infinity genre, that's also what I'm looking for but since there is hardly any, I decided to write one myself. I'm a complete novice so according to myself, the story is great (Only because I authored it). Give it a try, give it a read, if you decided that it's not your cup of tea, that's also fine, there's a lot of other great fanfictions to read other than mine. I think I'm gonna stop, thanks.

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The story is really good and entertaining The author now write well, The story is really good and entertaining The author now write well, The story is really good and entertaining The author now write well,

Author your story are fabulous but can you add a Anime World next plz Author your story are fabulous but can you add a Anime World next plz Author your story are fabulous but can you add a Anime World next plz

particularly enjoyed this fan fic so far with all the mashed up worlds combined in the main world as well as the other sub world adventures with the mcs. i enjoyed the interactions with world characters and our mcs particularly and would hope to see more al so i feel that the mcs each should get there own companion but thats my own opinion even without my the story is already really enjoyable.

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